Hi, I wrote a short sci-fi script.
Logline:When a black hole threatens our planet, a soldier must team up with an unlikely ally to save the world.
Link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wDTszz\_1HBMmRPIgM0r52tqpqHjTUMu2/view?usp=drivesdk
Thank you for reading this!:)
Am un prieten bun de alta orientare(nu e asta o problema, eu accept pe oricine) care si-a gasit iubit in celalat capat al tarii fata de unde stam noi si vrea sa il viziteze(el inca locuieste cu familia).
A vrut sa merg si eu cu el acolo, sa stam cateva zile la iubitul lui, in conditiile in care eu nu cunosc deloc pe nimeni de acolo, nici ei pe mine. Nici nu i-am vazut vreodata(adica niste straini pentru mine). Am refuzat. Acum e suparat pe mine. Am gresit ca nu am vrut sa merg?
How many characters can a short film/script have? Is there a maximum?
How can you write something that you imagine happens in slow motion(eg: part of a battle, or a spear flying at an enemy)?
Thank you for reading this!:)
Title: Invisible Terror
Genre: Horror
Pages: 4
Actors: 1
Locations: a house.
Link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xsDRagp0W20g6iuzy\_VYCzbBurlVEM6\_/view?usp=drivesdk
Price: we'll talk:)
Hi, I am rewriting a script I wrote a while ago and could use your thoughts on it:)
Title: Blue Diamonds
Format: Feature
Genre: Action
Pages: 90.
Logline: A down on his luck ex-soldier teams up with a crime family to stop a crooked cop's quest to build a deadly weapon.
link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BqJu0fcyeLqNsd90M0W1SzWPbP\_en41Y/view?usp=drivesdk
Could use feedback on everything:)
Thank you for reading this:)
Title: Night Out
Pages:6
Actors: 5
Logline: When a group of spies posing as waiters plan something big, an agent's dating night takes a dangerous turn
Locations: restaurant. Street.
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uN6yL8LTDoHxgMpeGqxDTmPEjhLngscm/view?usp=drivesdk
Price: we'll talk:)
Hi, can the hero state or explain his main goal through dialogue(talking to someone else)? I just did a rewrite where my hero was asked what he wants...is it ok?
I won't give names, but I was contacted by a famous screenwriter and producer and we talked and moved the conversation on whatsapp.
It went well, until he/she started presenting me a crypto investment site and assured me I will win a lot of money.
He/she kept insisting I should join and won't stop praising it and presented me evidence(screenshots) of his/her huge earnings from that site. I just blocked that screenwriter. Was it a scam?
A man goes to a doctor and says:
' Doctor, after I wake up, my head hurts for half an hour, what should I do?'
'Then wake up half an hour later'
says the doctor.
A man takes his dog for a walk, when someone asks:
''Where are you taking this pig?"...
"It's a dog." says the man.
"I know, I was talking to it."
Title: Invisible Terror
Pages: 4
Logline: When his wife's spirit unleashes terror upon him, her killer husband must face the consequences and confess.
Characters: 1
Locations: a house.
Price: We'll talk:)
Link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/13xBNwzO8o2t-3BGoXTJX6IOnVELyg72v/view?usp=drivesdk
Hi, I'm rewriting a screenplay I wrote and have two grammar questions:)
Which is the right way to write:"Sarah rides shotgun", or "Sarah is shotgun"? She sits next to the driver...
Which question sounds right: "When was the last time you took a shower", or "When was the last time you showered"?
Thank you for reading this!:)
What would the new AI movies mean for regular movies and screenwriters?
This is a dream of mine and I wrote a few scripts, but by the time at least some of them will be ready enough to be submitted to the industry, will I still stand a chance for them to be considered?
Hi, I wrote an action sci-fi script and would love to hear your thoughts on it!:)
Title: Kill 2550
Pages 90
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lZ6cG2ZPu7MAtXql1MpI1qah8dmiTtXN/view?usp=drivesdk
Hi, I submitted one of my scripts to a free feedback site, and the rewiever said the screenplay lane(that of reluctant heroes and their action stories) is very crowded. Here is part of the feedback:
Your character instincts are strong — that's the thing to build on. You know how to create a lead that people want to watch, so lean into that harder. Next time, pair that same instinct with a concept that's bolder and more unexpected — something where the premise itself makes people say "I haven't seen that before." You've got the casting instinct; now swing bigger on the idea. That's what gets you from a crowded lane into your own lane.
I didn't understand some of it...Does it say I should quit this particular script and choose another one with a new concept, or change it to be more unique, bolder?