KAVITA (Poem in hindi)

कविता क्या है?

वृक्षों के पर्णों का वायु में लहराना, या पक्षियों का स्वतंत्र गगन में चहचहाना।

मोर का खुले पंखों संग थिरकना, या प्रियतमा का यूँ खिल के मुस्कुराना।

सूर्योदय की स्वर्णिम किरणें, या चंद्रमा का अलौकिक सौंदर्य?

सरस्वती की वीणा का सुर, या नटराज का तांडव-नृत्य?

क्या कविता केवल मानव मस्तिष्क तक सीमित है,

या प्रकृति में मिश्रित एक पावन वरदान है?

और मेरे लिए...

कविता इस जीवन की सबसे मधुर मिठास है,

जो हर निशब्द भावना को दे दे वाणी, वही पावन अहसास है।

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Day 2 of being consistent. Not good with words but trying.

Rate it out of 10 . And a genuine review would help❤️✨

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u/notsofunnyravi — 7 days ago

Mulaqaat (poem in Ghazal style hindi)

I tried writing poem in hindustani Ghazal style. It's my first time writing something in hindi. I reaserched a bit about advance words in Urdu and how to portray feelings.

Give me a review of possible and rate it out of 10 please.

u/notsofunnyravi — 9 days ago

Why Birthday feels normal these days

Today's my birthday but I didn't had any excitement for it. And even now I don't have any plans and it feels like a normal day . Is it just me or anyone else finds celebrating or making plans for birthday boring?.

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u/notsofunnyravi — 13 days ago

What makes me happy (Poem)

What Makes Me Happy

It's when we talk .when you say

"you know what happened today".

when you laugh at my silly jokes,

when you hold my hand

and tell me I mean everything to you.

Your smile, Your love, Your silly stories.

Your presence is what makes me happy.

I wish to tell you,

if fate allows us to meet again someday,

you were the source of it all.

Even now, your laugh is the happiest sound I know.

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A genuine review will help. Rate it out of 10. And also tell me scope of improvements . 🤍🥀

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/CKXQynODXU

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/6s82uQzrfN

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u/notsofunnyravi — 14 days ago

Rate my poetry out of 10.

Recently I made hobby of writing, I wrote a poetry I don't even know if it could be called poetry. Give me honest review and some suggestions please. And to tell you my word knowledge is quite weak so I only tried.🫠

u/notsofunnyravi — 15 days ago
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Need suggestions for novels to read

I'm a beginner in reading books. Till now I have read The fault in our stars, it ends with us , the white nights. Can anyone recommend me my next novel to read?

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u/notsofunnyravi — 15 days ago