Deuxième post sur se sub, j’espère que vous pourrez me donner un avis sur ce poème.
J’ai commencer il y’a deux semaines, comment améliorer mes vers et ma métriques ? Et où trouvera des dictionnaire de rime en ligne ?
J’aimerais m’améliorer j’ai 17 ans et j’ai commencer la poésie il y’a une semaine, comment améliorer mes vers et métaphores ?
Et t’il possible de trouver un site ou un dictionnaire pour améliorer son vocabulaire ?
The more I progress in my Life the more people around me seems unable to process what I say, or they just cannot understand my point of view or my taste philosophical views etc.
Does this happen to u and if yes how would u described it what if u would give it a reason what would it be ?
PS: sorry for my english it’s not my first language
Hello, first of all I really appreciate ur presence on this post and I hope that u have the Time to read it all. Tysm
i would like to present myself, I’m 17 and I live in Europe , I had a very traumatazing childhood from as far has I remember I always knew pain and anarchy in my life, my mom was a lonely mom with 3 kid, and my dad when he was here was beating me and my litlle brother and sexually assaulting my litlle sister.
For my mom she was tired but she was doing her best to protect us and she manage to pull us out of this bad situation, we went far its changed a lot of thing in a good way but problem didn’t stop tho, my dad was still trying to hurt us in différent way and he manage to pull this off very often.
When we move away from the Town were my father was, i got into a new school and i got bullied never talked about it to anyone i kept it to me until high school. When I got into high school depression came then médication then hospital 3 times in 1 years and many month of pain
And I did the WISC and I got diagnosed with HIGH INTELLTUAL POTENTIAL ( high IQ) it made sense ive always been différent, and this différence made me deeply lonely, in fact so lonely I havent been able to really talk to anyone in my life cause WHY ? Whats the point we will all Forget be forgotten and nobody can trully understand my pain like I can’t understand other people pain I can just try, and it may be enought but I just don’t see the point in anything now
I just think without stopping, never exept when I’m high cause of the médication, and that’s killing me lonelyness me being alone in my head even when there is my friend around
I’m always by myself talking to me, judging everything I do, and going deeper into thinking, and I’m alone, i know there is people like me but ill never be able to talk to them cause i cant I just can’t Even if I try I know ive done it before
This post is not as chaostic as my mind but u get a glince of it, I’m sorry that u had to read that
Maybe nobody will read this maybe people won’t understand or will try to do it, maybe I’m just crazy or maybe nothing real I honestly don’t know
But if anything has a meaning wich it has then I’ll be less alone I guess