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This is an illustration I've done based on the universe and characters from the novel “Étoiles mourantes” (1999) by Ayerdhal and Jean-Claude Dunyach

I highly recommand the book !

Commission (A2)

Based on the universe and characters from the novel “Étoiles mourantes” (1999) by Ayerdhal and Jean-Claude Dunyach

(I highly recommand the book by the way!)

Commission (A2)

Based on the universe and characters from the novel “Étoiles mourantes” (1999) by Ayerdhal and Jean-Claude Dunyach

Commande en A2
D'après l'univers et les personnages issus du roman "Étoiles mourantes" (1999) écrit par Ayerdhal et Jean-Claude Dunyach

Hello, I feel like my drawings are lacking something, they feel like something is missing.
Some may think it's the background, but I think it's not necessarily the case, as you can see on the five last drawings (which are not mine but from @ sungmoomoo).
By the way, the drawings from sungmoomoo here have quite strong perspective, but on his other works he does not exclusively use this kind of strong perspective, so this might be a lead to work on, but not enough in my opinion.

What am I missing ?
My main leads here are about cropping, composition, and maybe ink ratio/ink details to bring focus on a specific part.
(All these drawings have been done on A4), maybe should I work on a bigger scale (but I don't necessarily think it's a need, since I could reproduce sungmoomoo's drawings on A4 and still get his good results)

Thank you for your help and time !

Hello, I feel like my drawings are lacking something, they feel like something is missing.
Some may think it's the background, but I think it's not necessarily the case, as you can see on the four last drawings (which are not mine but from @ sungmoomoo).
By the way, the drawings from sungmoomoo here have quite strong perspective, but on his other works he does not exclusively use this kind of strong perspective, so this might be a lead to work on, but not enough in my opinion.

What am I missing ?
My main leads here are about cropping, composition, and maybe ink ratio/ink details to bring focus on a specific part.
(All these drawings have been done on A4), maybe should I work on a bigger scale (but I don't necessarily think it's a need, since I could reproduce sungmoomoo's drawings on A4 and still get his good results)

Thank you for your help and time !

Hello, I feel like my drawings are lacking something, they feel like something is missing.
Some may think it's the background, but I think it's not necessarily the case, as you can see on the four last drawings (which are not mine but from @ sungmoomoo).
By the way, the drawings from sungmoomoo here have quite strong perspective, but on his other works he does not exclusively use this kind of strong perspective, so this might be a lead to work on, but not enough in my opinion.

What am I missing ?
My main leads here are about cropping, composition, and maybe ink ratio/ink details to bring focus on a specific part.
(All these drawings have been done on A4), maybe should I work on a bigger scale (but I don't necessarily think it's a need, since I could reproduce sungmoomoo's drawings on A4 and still get his good results)

Thank you for your help and time !