








I'm rewriting Game of Thrones Season 5 to be accurate to the books. Here is my take on a cold open featuring Varamyr Sixskins:
Hello!
I'm currently diving into creating my own works and have started tackling a massive passion project: a complete rewrite of Game of Thrones Season 5. I'm still very new to screenwriting formatting and am currently building this out in Google Docs, so I'm sure there are some technical growing pains I need to iron out. I would love some constructive criticism on this cold open set beyond the Wall.
Specifically, I'm hoping to get some eyes on my formatting and visualization. I've been trying to incorporate standard technical action lines and camera directions (like the tracking shots and push-ins you'll see in the text) but I want to know if they translate well to the page or if they feel too heavy-handed for a script. I'd also love to know if this works effectively as a cold open. Does it set the right pace for a Game of Thrones season premiere, and beyond that, does it hold up structurally as a gripping opening for any standard television episode?
On a narrative level, I really want to emphasize character agency and survival instincts, even for minor characters. Kella, Yglif, Ragger, and the rest are only introduced/>!killed off!< here, but I want to make sure they feel somewhat distinct and characterized on a basic level.
Finally, for the ASOIAF book readers out there, I'd love to know how you feel about this and hear your predictions on how it might play out. For those who want the context of exactly what I'm aiming for: >!the warg within the one-eyed wolf at the end is Varamyr Sixskins!<.
Thank you in advance for taking time out of your day to read my first draft! Any constructive criticism would be hugely appreciated.