u/Ants-nest

5 years ago I posted Cremling concepts that were popular. I’ve finally come back to producing some personal Stormlight work. Storms I love this world.It’s really cool to see some of my work come up high in Google images when searching certain Stormlight content. I’m hoping I can continue to help new readers build a visual identity. around the amazing world Sanderson has created.

Let me know your thoughts. I love receiving feedback both positive and negative. I have a lot to learn still. Is this how you imagines this creature? or did you have something else in mind?

This is for a larger story with a few too many complex moving components, so I’ve put it on the shelf to focus on a more simplistic narrative with realistic outcomes. I will be using my current project as a way to improve my storytelling techniques and writing skills in hopes I can come back to this with sharper skills to pull it off.

I’m posting here to hopefully find the right community to share my progress with and receive feedback and critiques as I chip away with my new story. Although visually different, I think feedback on this can help my consider my approach on future pages. Some things I considered while doing this page was to try and create a smaller visual narrative that occurs within a single page but contributes to a scene as a whole, and to have the final panel act as a point of interest and encourage people to turn the page and keep reading.

Love to hear your thoughts. How does the dialogue flow? Is the sequence of panels and their position appropriate or is it too cluttered and hard to follow? Any and all feedback is warmly received.

Thanks!