u/Broad_Age_6099

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

So I usually write pulling things from my life. And I just started to get serious with this girl and I make music anonymously and only 5 of my closest friends know so but I let her know. I made a song talking about her in the lyrics but not like I am calling out her name or anything but I usually post all the non serious just trying to improve songs I make on tiktok but idk I just feel like a fucking weirdo for letting another person hear a song when it is obvious they are being mentioned. The same goes for cap rapping about bitches in a more metaphorical sense even tho it isn’t actually true it just feels wrong yk. I do not think she would mind because she really likes my music and has been very supportive for the couple days she has known about it. Idk I just am feeling lost. Sorry for making you read all this but ANY advice would be so awesome to hear.

I’m looking for advice on a demo of one of my songs to help me improve, If anyone could give me advice it would be greatly appreciated!