





Seeking design advice (read desc please)
Hello! (Actual question/advice at bottom)
Lore: This my oc Maku, he’s inspired by Makucha from the Lion Guard! In his freshman year he’s kind of a silly punk who likes to annoy the trouble maker students because he thinks they’re cool (this is for a past au- so no canon characters here.) He’s always talking crap and threatening fights, but backs out once the other people fights back. He’s strong but doesn’t know how to use his strength, he just works out for the ladies. He also tries hard to be evil, but he’s not very good at it. He mostly wants to be like his father, who is a POS. He was an accident baby between a pretty girl and a high rockstar, his father is known in the music business for his temper and catnip use. In his sophomore year he makes two new friends who end up being horrible influences on him. He gets detention, starts stealing, graffiti, and so on. Eventually he realizes that everyone he’s ever looked up to is a horrible person, and he breaks. In his junior year he becomes a very horrible person- anger, loud, basically like his father, and eventually this leads to an overblot, especially since I gave him a powerful spell to combat his silliness. His spell, Rock and Roll (temp name), gives him magically reinforced legs, giving him the ability to run fast, jump high, and climb. It also makes it so when he lands he’s able to crack the ground below. The only drawback is it’s temporary. Only running lets it last longer, but jumping makes it dissipate faster, meaning he has to recast many times to keep it for long.
Actual overblot: After years of this, Crowley decides that Maku needs to be expelled, and Maku is not happy. He starts using his spell, trying to prove that he should still be in this school. He breaks ground, threatens Crowley, attacks people- people he eventually overblots.
Question/advice: His overblot is still a WIP, but how should I make it look more like an actual overblot? It’s not really giving OB to me and I don’t know how to fix it. Is it the colors maybe? Any advice would help!