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It’s called ‘The Galaxy’s Countdown’ and it’s a story I’ve had for like years.

Summery: At the height of the Empire's reign, a dangerous threat lingers in the shadows, waiting.

Meanwhile, Jr. Lieutenant Lilith Erbin sees an unknown vessel coming towards the Imperial cargo ship 'The Moonwalker.' After being brushed aside by her superiors, Lilith takes dramatic steps to insure that the Imperial ship and its crew make it out alive.

Across the Galaxy, Arwin Uvlai and her brother, Evin Ata'za, almost crash into a cluster of black holes called 'The Maw Cluster.' After narrowly avoiding the Maw, the two siblings find themselves face to face with clones who had disappeared years before.

It’s a work in progress and I’m not quite done with it but I do have the first chapter on Wattpad. If anyone wants to read it please do, I need second opinions on it. My Wattpad account name is @starwars1stories

What if Abeloth escaped during the rain of the Empire? How would it change things?

What if Abeloth escaped during the reign of the Empire? How would it change things?

Anyone who’s more into her lore willing to help? Anything helps!

I’m not as into the lore as some other people, there’s just something’s I’m not knowledgeable about. Anyone want to help me answer these questions?

1. how do Imperial navy Star Destroyers operate and what are the different types of jobs required to run a Star Destroyer?
2. how would I go about writing Grand Admiral Thrawn’s character?
3. is it completely inaccurate to have a character go from Lieutenant to General to Grand Admiral?
4. which of the following should I use when writing: first person, second person, or third person?
5. what other details would be important to includ?

It’s called Hide and Seek and it’s about five ‘Keepers’ who are assigned to fix an energy station. While they are on the mission an ongoing investigation is underway. The investigation is trying to figure out who is sending classified information to rebels in the region. The book has dinosaurs, mystery, horror aspects, and a lot of running around. I have 4577 words done so far.

I’m writing a dinosaur dystopian thriller novel and need advice.