u/Dry-Fact-2611

Your oc goes to "Slips Prank Shop" late at night and then they see the lights go off half way through their shopping.. your oc looks around to see that the cashier turn off the lights, you ask her what she's doing and she says: "closing up for the night, buut if you want we can talk for a bit.. if not then you can skidaddle on out of here and finish your shopping tomorrow..!"

Im making a series about people getting trapped in a dreamlike land, with countless entities and dangers, I just made the first one, what do you think about it? And yes, these are inspired off the housewalkers from doctor nowhere

Ik its a radio but I just don't know what type

Ignore all the erase marks, his name is ping and not pong

Any tips on how to make it better?