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If they start talking to you then you PHYSICALLY cannot leave or stop listening until they're done talking, you have to listen to everything they have to say until they're done. They're a living unskippable cutscene, and if you try to stop listening to them, your heart explodes in you fucking die like the worthless fucking loser you are you piece of shit, fuck you. Okay that part was a joke but still, cool idea.

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So in this story idea that I have there are people called Attractors and they have the ability to attract a specific phenomenon to themselves, for example- the Attractor for Speed attracts speed to themselves and becomes extremely fast, the Attractor for Love can make people fall in love with them, the Attractor for Friction can make themselves stick to walls or they can steal friction from other people to make them slip, the Attractor for Weather can control the weather, the Attractor for Pressure can make things burst, the Attractor for Insanity is a goddamn lunatic, I think you get the gist by now. I'm still thinking about it and getting it all figured out, but I think it's a really unique power system.

I really want to make a manga series in the future and I've been trying to come up with a good story, I've had other ideas but I don't think they're good enough, but I think I've landed on the one I want to make. It's about a supervillain named Omen (real name: Stacy Stevens) and she is the leader of the Legion of Evil and the most feared supervillain in the world. In the first chapter she is defeated by a rookie superhero named Icon-X and ends up arrested, if she wants to not spend the rest of her life in prison she has to join a government program that teaches young rookie superheroes to be heroes so that she can be rehabilitated and become the hero that she was always meant to be. Here's everything I have about her so far...

Her powers: She's a speedster and she has the ability to manipulate crimson lightning that looks really badass

Her personality: In the beginning of the series she's obviously very evil since she's a supervillain, she's cruel, intimidating, ruthless, and very narcissistic. But by the end she's changed a lot, she's kind-hearted, caring, loving, and she's the world's most loved superhero.

Her dynamics with other characters: She's put into a team of rookie teenage superheroes trained by a professional hero named Wynter (real name: Zachary Jameson) who is a 23-year-old single dad with the ability to manipulate ice. At first she doesn't get along with them at all, but as the series goes on she becomes really close to them and by the end they're basically a family.

I'm still working on it, but I could really use some tips on how to write Stacy since she is a woman and I want to make sure she is very well written.

I'm in the process of creating my own manga series called Cardboard-Face, it's about a teenage bounty hunter named Viktor Vex who has a piece of cardboard for a face because he lost his head on one of his first missions, his little sister created a new head for him out of cardboard and hot glue and resurrected him using dark magic. But I'm wondering what would be the best opening for the story, should I start with Viktor already being Cardboard-Face and telling his boss the story of why his face is like that, or should I open it with a fight scene between Viktor and a criminal he's hunting that ends up with Viktor being decapitated and becoming Cardboard-Face? Please let me know what would be the best idea.