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Muskaan Kapoor: The daughter of an oft insulted househelp, Muskaan Kapoor has built herself from sheer grit, ruthless ambition and the sharpest cunning after her good for nothing husband was arrested on their son's fifth birthday celebration in the cramped chawl. Now as the CTO in a top Indian IT MNC, Muskaan has transcended her humble beginnings and has forged her own empire with silk of elegance and sharp sword of intelligence. (Age in her 40s)
Medha Gehlot: Would push her beloved into fire rather than watching him in love with someone else, jealous, envious, possessive, unhinged with a burning anger at the one she loved the most. The person she hates the most is the one whom she loves the most so she sends him into the jaws of death because her anger is too intense for a living man to tolerate. Has a sharp brain but to angry to use it correctly. (Age in her late 30s/40s)
Swasti Khare: Disturbed by the fraught married life of her parents and losing her friendships to study and career rivalry, JEE aspirant Swasti finds solace in crushing on an animated character, only to fall for someone whom she has never seen just after reading his poems. But nothing is what it seems. Things take a darker turn and ten years later, Swasti doesn't know what's real and what's her imagination. (Age= 15 and then in her 20s)
Mansi Mishra aka Mickey: The Queen Bee in her high school, Mansi Mishra has everything a teenage girl could dream of. Class topper, pretty looks, feisty attitude and...a crush on the bespectacled, timid, bullied guy with braces and a stammer. Mansi becomes his self proclaimed knight in shining armor, protecting him from every bully like a Supergirl. Then? Then, life happens, and 10 years later, the same Mansi Mishra is a grumpy, Behenji type IT MNC employee whose only solace are Teletubbies conspiracy theories and cough,cough Wattpad billionaire romances. Quick to throw punches at anyone who dared trouble her bhola bhaala crush, Mansi has been the target of life's punches back to back. (Age 15/16 then 29)
Aslesha: A college going girl in 1990s who loves dancing on Falguni Pathak songs, dreams of getting married to either a film star or a rockstar in her small Konkan town and mocks her Lallu neighbor. (Age= 19/20)
Parmita Tomar: Sensible and sensitive, introvert Parmita is reduced to a hollow shell of herself as she loses her love since high school turned fiance in an accident just a week before their wedding. Grappling with PTSD and Survivor guilt, Parmita enrols herself to get an AI version of her deceased fiance. (Age Mid 30s)
Slide 1 is for ML, slide 2 and 3 are for FL #1, slide 4 is for FL #2 and slide 5 is for another character
Context: The only mistake all the characters committed was underestimating someone they shouldn't have,resulting in consequences none of them was prepared for. ML underestimated FL#1, FL#1 underestimated FL#2 and FL#2 underestimated ML.
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Let me know in the comments which of these male leads are you interested to read about and if you want a similar post for my female leads.
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If you're fed up of seeing my posts promoting my book 'The Dead Husband' each day, or maybe you're in your 'Soft era', or maybe you've a thing for sweet, subtle vintage love stories set in 1940s, 1960s, 1990s (sorry for skipping Disco wala 70s and 80s era), you can try my cchota packet bada dhamaaka books with just 6 chapters, 5 chapters etc.
Has any woman here come from a very limiting or oppressive background (an impoverished region/being financially dependent over oppressive in-laws etc.), had endured bullying, being mocked and being made into a doormat, only to achieve financial independence after pursuing a career, moving to a big city and now after 10 to 15 years, has realized she cannot be more different than her previous version? What's your glow up story and when you realized you're no more the same woman.
There was a movie Shiddat, where FL enters common washroom for boys to watch them without towels and it was portrayed as a cute nok jhok moment between male and female lead. Just some hours ago, there was a screenshot of someone searching for a story where FL blackmails ML to marry using same blackmail. Even on Instagram, whenever news of men unalived/**ped etc. by women comes, most comments by women are "Are you afraid of this small thing?", " We don't want equality, we want revenge", "Blue drum supremacy" etc. And mind you I've seen such comments in 1000s on the news of a 5 year old boy **ped. So my question is, as a writer (even if it's on Wattpad), when did the race to prove oneself as the greatest self proclaimed feminist and progressive person became so cutthroat that people have started celebrating **pe of 5-yo kid just because he belongs to male gender, when did women ogling at male lead's body part become equivalent to "Why should boys have all the fun?"
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Summer holidays have begun (for youngsters of course and for parents, not for unmoored oldies like me) so if you're getting bored and want to read something non-popular, something you haven't heard about in any reels or SM conversation, something (Khair underrated to pata nahi, vo to aap log decide karenge, par rated hi nahi hai meri books), I have books from almost each genre, but if you want a sample taste of flavor of my stories, please try my books:
Thank you so much. I've multiple books so you can choose whichever you like out of these:
Genre: Revenge Thriller
Synopsis: Aditya Deshmukh has multiple identities: A loving father, a sacrificing and loyal husband, a dutiful son, an underpaid dedicated teacher, a respectful understanding friend in a dilapidated computer centre. But none of these identities is enough to save him when tragedy strikes. Failed by the same system who should've protected an innocent person, the biggest betrayal came from the person closest to Aditya.
Status: Ongoing
Status Completed
Total chapters: 18
Genre: Romcom
Synopsis: A plucky high school Queen Bee, Mansi Parihar aka Mickey who has a glowdown meets her estranged best friend Nicky again in situations she'd not prefer otherwise. She is used to see her estranged best friend as bespectacled, timid, shy, bullied, stammering boy who was nothing more than a male version of 'Damsel in Distress' for everyone except her and who always needed to save him, but now as grown ups in the corporate world, Nicky no longer needs her as savior.
Status Completed
Total chapters: 22
Genre: Coming of age, Teen thriller, Realistic fiction
Synopsis: Infatuated with an anime character, Swasti is a sixteen year old teenager who is preparing for IIT-JEE despite her dreams of writing an unforgettable novel. She falls for Rachit, a boy she has never seen, by reading his poems etched with a compass on the desks of her coaching classes. When the day finally comes for her to meet Rachit, a reality-check changes her life forever.
Saarthak is a bestselling author who's unaware that he is connected with an invisible thread to Swasti.
Spanning over a decade, will the story of these two weird people get a wonderful ending?
Status Completed
Total chapters: 6
Synopsis: नब्बे का दशक: सुनते ही क्या याद आता है आपको?
वो कैसेट में गाने भरवाने के लिए लाइन में लगना, पॉपपिंस की रंगीन गोलियां, WWE के कार्ड्स जमा करना, या फिर वो अजीब सा रूमानी एहसास जिसे आज सिर्फ एक क्रश के दायरे में सीमित कर दिया है?
तो लीजिये फिर हाज़िर हूँ मैं लेकर कहानी अनिरुद्ध और अश्लेषा की... अश्लेषा जैसे चंचल पवन का झोंका और अनिरुद्ध जैसे गहरा समुद्र...और उनकी ये दिलचस्प कहानी
Language: Hindi
Status: Ongoing
Title: Romantic fiction
Synopsis: Parmita's teenage love turned fiancé is dead. And she wants to resurrect him as an AI version. But the CEO of Tech company behind this AI project, Mahaswin Goswami is less than thrilled to make her a part of the ambitious pilot project of his company. Why? Good question.
For starters, Parmita is Mahaswin's old classmate and the grieving fiancee of his elder brother figure Dev. And Mahaswin is a single father who has his hands already full from running the top technology company, handling his adolescent brat daughter, and weaving the web of revenge for his cheating ex-wife.
And most important, Mahaswin is developing feelings for Paro who has only deceased Dev in her heart. But why does his dark-as-a-stone heart full of revenge start beating for Parmita all of a sudden?
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In present timeline, the woman encounters a casanova five years younger than her and feels a pull towards him. So now the woman is in a love triangle with the boy in 1960s who's going to die soon and his reincarnated version in present timeline (unbeknownst to anyone).
After a time leap of 5 years, the ML with a different identity meets the vampire hunting group and FL again. FL is first perplexed on seeing his face, but later decides he's some other person after seeing him hunting a criminal and drinking his blood. As memories start coming back to ML, ML has to grapple with working as an undercover agent to destroy the vampire community that killed his parents without letting FL know the truth.
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In present timeline, the woman encounters a casanova five years younger than her and feels a pull towards him. So now the woman is in a love triangle with the boy in 1960s who's going to die soon and his reincarnated version in present timeline (unbeknownst to anyone).
After a time leap of 5 years, the ML with a different identity meets the vampire hunting group and FL again. FL is first perplexed on seeing his face, but later decides he's some other person after seeing him hunting a criminal and drinking his blood. As memories start coming back to ML, ML has to grapple with working as an undercover agent to destroy the vampire community that killed his parents without letting FL know the truth.
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In present timeline, the woman encounters a casanova five years younger than her and feels a pull towards him. So now the woman is in a love triangle with the boy in 1960s who's going to die soon and his reincarnated version in present timeline (unbeknownst to anyone).
After a time leap of 5 years, the ML with a different identity meets the vampire hunting group and FL again. FL is first perplexed on seeing his face, but later decides he's some other person after seeing him hunting a criminal and drinking his blood. As memories start coming back to ML, ML has to grapple with working as an undercover agent to destroy the vampire community that killed his parents without letting FL know the truth.
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Should I give links or not? Tell me in the comments.
Actually total of my eight leads have been ded till now. My guilty pleasure is dead male leads vaise (Ekta Kapoor + Bhootiya story fandom unite) , par kabhi kabhi I make even my FLs ded to spice up things.
Okay so the ML is sort of antihero and FL is sort of anti-villain in the story and the story is so dark that a happy ending for both of them isn't feeling natural while writing. So would it hurt the readers' emotions if leads die in the story?