u/Excellent-Anxiety989

Like it’s a college town but a terrible dating scene or full of racist

LETHAL

44 pgs

Hey there, screenwriter with two credits and published author from Detroit(BASKETBALL) Mi and I was hoping if I could get some input on this pilot I have been trying to get picked up for quite awhile now. I have even had someone sponsor for me to submit it to Bluecat(where it did not advance). If anyone could tell me what works, what doesn't work, if its complete trash etc. With things like The Color Purple, Is God Is, Fences, and so many other very negative depictions of inner city minority(mostly black) males, I wanted to create something that would resonate for people that look like me and come from places like where I grew up.

I appreciate any and all help. I just want to be the Black Taylor Sheridan lol I plan to submit the pilot and the second novel in my series to the Blacklist this weekend for grading this weekend!

Logline: A gifted young engineer uses his genius and resources to become Detroit’s most feared vigilante—until a brutal confrontation with a rising kingpin and the return of a former lover drag his two lives toward collision.

But as a lifelong Indy/Harrison/George and Steve fan and a writer myself, I HAD to develop a character for the novel universe I write based on Indy. The question I had was: what are some of you guys favorite lost treasures, real or mythical or historical mysteries, also real or mythical that you always thought were interesting??? I myself have been diving into the fact and fiction around Mansa Musa for example recently for this series

UPDATE: I like triple posted and apologize. Deleted the extras