u/Extension-Nebula6753

How would you write a epiosde about Duke & Duncan?

My story takes place after "Duke the proud engine" by Richard Jordan. Video made by Fantastic Mr. S: https://youtu.be/zkVeet\_hEvM?si=-CwSwsk\_MY37Nj3T

Duke know helps Rusty with the maintenance & is a total fuss-pot to the workmen. Duncan arrive complaining as usual, & while everyone else learned to ignore him. But Duke was new & didn't tolerate additude. He scolded Duncan, but that made things worst.

Duncan would later have conversation with Skarleoy & Rheneas, while at the same time Duke would be have one with Peter Sam & Sir Handel or Rusty about each other.

Next morning Sir Topphamhatt or Mr Percival give them both a task of taking slate. Much to their annoyance. They take the the train, but they stuck on a bridge when Duke broke down. And of course Duncan starts complaining again & insulting Duke. Duke had enough, calls him ungrateful brat, and asks why he was like this.

Based off of this story made by Kefier Adams: https://youtu.be/FY8MslU9X9s?si=g85cwwL7QrjLtmF4

Duke then feels bad, apologies to Duncan, and tells him the reason why he's a stick in the mud/work aholic. Is because he didn't want to lose another Railway. Duncan then willingly pushes the train by himself and they make it to the location.

Duncan works as hard as he could, while Duke is at the works getting repaired. Later Duncan arrives at the sheds tired. Someone makes a comment about Duncan working hard. But they still congratulate him.(Basically the ending of Kefier Adams video).

*The End*

What are you're idea's?

u/Extension-Nebula6753 — 5 days ago