Need story help

I'm trying to make a short story about my chapter, but don't have a solid base to start writing from and could use some help.

For background context, the Blooded Fists are on a crusade to find their chapter master, picking up stray marines along the way, returning them after, if requested. They work in battle groups of two companies, rarely do these companies split. They make great use of transports carrying heavy armour, along with hiring gang members from hive cities.

The first image above is of a small subjugation force, and the second image is of the forces scouting team.

This is part of the fifth battle group known as the bleeding serpents, for its inclusion of alpha legion loyalists and speed of a striking snake, as this group has the most tacticus and phobos armoured marines.

u/Forthe_greatergood_5 — 2 days ago

Finished my first dreadnought

I converted him from a kit bashed grey knight dreadnought with two twin autocannons, he will now be an anchor in battle for the Blooded Fists

u/Forthe_greatergood_5 — 6 days ago

What is your chapters greatest strength?

This can be physical, mental, emotional, any strength, including a secret they keep under wraps.

I'll go first. A side from their natural armour, the Blooded Fists know of a way to keep their dreadnoughts awake and sane indefinitely, this does mean they refuse to use the redemptor chassis, as they know the marine inside is replaceable, and that is no way to treat an ancient of the chapter.

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u/Forthe_greatergood_5 — 1 month ago

My Homebrew legio, also called the Honorless by other legios for their way of war. Using ambush tactics and one shot one kill weapons to make sure you never see them before you fall.

u/Forthe_greatergood_5 — 2 months ago

The Blooded Fists 9th company with their chapter serfs.

On a distant world, the Blooded Fists are making a forward push against a chaos insurrection, out numbered, they hold out for the rest of the fleet to reach them, and continue the search for their chapter master.

u/Forthe_greatergood_5 — 2 months ago