Can someone give me advice on how to make this look better?

I made the first one on paper then traced it on IBS paint

u/Imnotuimyou1223 — 26 days ago
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Can someone help me with this drawing or give me constructive criticism

How to make this look more cartoony/better The first is on ibs which I traced from my paper

u/Imnotuimyou1223 — 26 days ago