u/Kakiyoin21

Just a question might be stupid but how do pen names work like, If i wamted to write in a pen name how will i prove its me ?

I have a short story available thats only 5 pages and low budget for upcoming directors willing to produce it it’s a thriller/horror script.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_NEWsPY9_LTQUh34-m_v3aH2kNJFZgw/view?usp=drivesdk

It’s a 5 page short story any feedback is appreciated and welcomed Im still new to writing techniques so please help me out. It’s a thriller/ horror script thats made for a low budget director

I have a short story available thats only 5 pages and low budget for upcoming directors willing to produce it it’s a thriller/horror script.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_NEWsPY9_LTQUh34-m_v3aH2kNJFZgw/view?usp=drivesdk

Im 16 and this my first time writing screenplay, Its a thriller its about a guy who becomes slowly obsessed over his looks and it ends up eating him alive ( idk if this has been done before) I would love some feedback tell me if it is sh1t or not and should I continue it? This is just the first 2 pages.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UfmHlBiA44rzrGl8EqrFoDL8c0ZFhu9u/view?usp=drive_link

I don’t the basics of writing a script but I have this idea for a short film, I don’t know what to do , I don’t have a budget or any cameras , I don’t have the script started, Im kinda of stuck , I know it’s bad , Any help would be appreciated