u/MagazineNecessary698

So I just felt like I wanted to make pretty ratfolk. As often they are designed as unclean and grungy. So I really vibed with Ysoki and went hard on the idea.

So here’s what I got.

Race: Ysoki
Name: Twali Mallo
Rank: High level merchant/trader

Daughter of an especially prosperous trading company amongst the Ysoki people Twali is often mistaken for royalty. Her particular clan tends towards gold/metal tattoos which are used to interact with their tech. Something reminiscent of biological signatures but different. Her clan also tends towards darker fur patterns and colors.

Twali is of high standing and holds herself with polite polished poise and elegance. A skilled negotiator she is rarely taken by surprise. She is very proud of her midnight fur and its ability to reflect starlight. Her skills have her extremely likely to Be next in line lead the company. The only issue is that she’s realizing outside of trade deals and high stakes negotiations she has had little experience with the worlds she’s been working with and visiting.

I won’t pretend stats are my strength so
High charisma and high intelligence and agility. She’s not especially strong but she can build/tinker with the best of them if given a chance.

Ummm that’s all I can think of!

If you guys have any ideas for what I can add or what might make her stronger as a npc or playable character I would love to know.

Also if you guys think pretty Ysoki is also a fun idea. Gahhh! I can’t believe I plucked up the courage to finally post this! Please be nice!

So I’ve been working on this project called Gotham streets for a pretty long time. And I finally been able to get B-man himself at least started. But I found that the design might be a bit too complicated in comparison to the rest of the cast.

I was using an anachronistic style for his costume. Trying to think of what his influences might be. For instance, he doesn’t want to be seen as some level of authority. Strength and something that might cause fear. But for this take, I also wanted a bit of playfulness on his part. So my plan was to have a larger pop of color on his design. To really hammer home how good he is at sneaking around. He still does all of the Batman creeping about, but the bright colors is almost a slight against anyone he’s gotten past.

I am looking for help on trying to streamline the design.

So while I’m at it, I’ll give the definition of what the artistic critique is: a critique- is giving advice that can help someone grow and improve their art and skills.

It is not insulting or degrading.

I would really appreciate any help.