Feedback request for Hollow Tide Episode 1.

I wonder if anyone would be willing to have a read through episode 1 of my four part series? I have uploaded the google drive link, and would love some feedback. I have been a writer (not professionally) for around 10 years and would like to get an idea of how I am doing really.

LOGLINE:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her public pregnancy and an unexpected bond with a young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Thanks in advance.

Rob

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u/NookPhoneo — 1 day ago

Feedback request for: Hollow Tide Episode 1. 59 pages. Drama

I wonder if anyone would be willing to have a read through episode 1 of my four part series? I have uploaded the google drive link, and would love some feedback. I have been a writer (not professionally) for around 10 years and would like to get an idea of how I am doing really.

LOGLINE:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her public pregnancy and an unexpected bond with a young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Thanks in advance.

Rob

Hollow Tide Ep1

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u/NookPhoneo — 1 day ago

Feedback Request

I wonder if anyone would be willing to have a read through episode 1 of my four part series? I have uploaded the google drive link, and would love some feedback. I have been a writer (not professionally) for around 10 years and would like to get an idea of how I am doing really.

LOGLINE:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her public pregnancy and an unexpected bond with a young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Thanks in advance.

Rob

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u/NookPhoneo — 1 day ago

I have a couple of pages. Can you let me know how they are?

This is a 2 part series.

The logline is:

After a chance late-night meeting on a rainy Leicester street, a young man battling severe panic disorder falls for a closeted British-Pakistani partner, forcing both to navigate the quiet strain of hidden identity and family expectations.

I have been writing for a few years and would love to get some rel feedback.

u/NookPhoneo — 7 days ago

Representation

I’m looking for representation. I have been writing screenplays for a number of years but haven’t approached anyone.

After researching, a lot of agents don’t let you submit without some type of relationship with a production house.

I am in the UK and would take any advice on any whether I should concentrate my search just in the UK or look further afield?

Thanks in advance.

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u/NookPhoneo — 8 days ago
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Cello

Does anyone in the UK know where I can get a free or low priced Cello?

I learned when I was younger and would love to take it up again , but can’t afford it.

Would love any help

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u/NookPhoneo — 13 days ago
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HOLLOW TIDE 10 pages.pdf

Logline:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her own secret pregnancy and a rebellious young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Would appreciate any feedback. Thanks

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u/NookPhoneo — 14 days ago

Screenplay

Hi folks. I’m new here and want to make some contacts for screenwriting in the UK.

I’ve been a writer for the last 10 years and have had a few credits. Including The Tudors.

I am finding myself at a loss to have my own work read or optioned.

Would love some support and friends in the community

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u/NookPhoneo — 20 days ago