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The stroy starts 2 months after the last arc

ARC 1 DAYA'S RETURN

Now tapu sena have started working

Tapu has started going to the shop

Goli has started to focus more on his studies of beinging a doctor rather then food

Gogi has started go to the garage

Sonu has started to takes classes instead of bhide so bhide can do deliver

Now anyways this arc starts when jethalal birthday was coming But this time he called Sundar and said DAYA HAS TO COME BACK OR ELSE THIS TIME HE WILL TAKE ALL OF THE MONEY SUNDAR HAS TAKEN FROM HIM LAST WARNING

Now sundar decides its time to send daya back tho its gonna be hard now As at night the society was waiting for daya

But then Sundar called tapu and said daya had been in a accident car crash all of them go the hospital jethalal sees daya in serious condition and cries he then gose to temple prays to god and says he will never ever look at babita if daya survives on the other hand

Daya condition had worsen

But then when they thought died she came back somehow when jethalal got that news he was super happy now after daya comes back to society jethalal locks himself with her and asks why was she gone for so long

She reveals that she had found out about his crush on babita thats why she always defended sundar against him jethalal was suprised and moved and she explained thats why she left becasue she thought he didn't love jetha apologises to her and says he dose love her he just had feelings for babita and from now on he will never ever look at babita

Then he gose to iyer house at night he takes iyer to the garden and apologises to iyer for all the crap he put iyer through

Iyer forgives him

Now the main part is daya car accident didn't happen by accident it was arrange jethalal gose home to find DAYA IS MISSING THEN A PHONE CALLS AND A PERSON TELLS JETHALAL HE HAS KIDDNAPED DAYA THIS IS DON RANVEER RANN'S YOUNGER BROTHER HE EXPLAINS TO JETHA AND SOCIETY THAT HE IS GONNA DAYA IN THE NEXT 3 HOURS

IF THEY CAN COME HERE AND SAVE HER DO IT

AND YES DONT TELL THE POLICE OR ELSE SHE DIES IN A SECOND NOW

ON THE OTHER HAND RANVEER WAS A SCARY DON HE TORMENTED DAYA

ON THE OTHER HAND SOCIETY PEOPLE WERE WORRIED THEN POPATLAL GAVE AN IDEA HOW ABOUT WE DO A DON VERUS DON

JETHALAL SAID last time we tried to do it it backfired

But POPATLAL said that this time they ain't bringing. Reguler they are bringing THE DON

Anyways after a hour when that don dosent come jethalal has had enough he says he is gonna go beg the don or something or give the don all his money if it means saving daya

But as he was gonna go out a black car comes and daya gets out from it with

Matka king mohanlal

They all were suprised to see mohanlal after like a decade

Now popatlal explains he called mohanlal to save daya

Then mohanlal explains how he saved daya

We see a flashback where popatlal calls and tells mohanlal everything

Mohanlal then calls ranveer and slaps him telling him to release daya he says that ranveer is a friend of mohanlal best friend thats why he is letting ranveer go this time

Now after this all gokuldham residents thank mohanlal

And after that SIGHS

They all do garba

The first arc will be about TAPU SENA

Now its a nomral Sunday at society afternoon Ganesh Chaturthi is coming tapu sena is like always playing cricket

Bhide is going to the soda shop anyways at the soda shop they all joke and talk

Bhide explains his concern for tapu SENA they are grown man's now they are 25 but they Still play cricket besides iyer all males dont agree with Bhide anyways then a police jeep comes a SI gets down he says TUM MA BHIDE KON HAI

ALL OF THEM STAND UP THAT SI WALKS UP TO BHIDE AND TOUCHS HIS FEET BHIDE IS SUPRISED and then he gets up and explains he is gopu aka gopal the leader of gopu sena and rival of tapu he explains that he has became a SI and has been a officer for 2 years by studying and he is here becasue he is getting a promotion to becoming a INSPECTOR so he is here to give sweets to them as he gives Bhide alpt of credit for where he is now anyways they have a momment

Then tapu sena arrives to chat with the males about the budget however they ask why is police here Bhide explains this gopu there old friend from childhood they were suprised but tapu goli and gogi beinging arrgont idiots said Jhooth Mat Bolo bhide uncle Gopu Ek Police Wala Ban Nahin Sakta anyways gopal gets mad at them and says oh tapu Pahli Baat gopu nahi inspector saheb aur duser baat me gopu he ho anyways they are suprised to know gopu became an inspector but then gopal said what do they do to earn money anyways tapu freezes for a momment they say they make videos tk earn money

Gopal then roasts them especially tapu by saying STUFF abe O Salo abhi tum bacche Nahin Ho 25 saal ke uncle Ban Gaye ho abhi tak apne aap ko Tappu se Dena bolte ho

He also roasts jethalal by saying"Jetha bhai tum bahut hi bade vyapari ho lekin Tumhara beta ek number ka Awaaz hai"

Tapu ego gets hurt he glares at gopu but of course he cant do anything anyways gopu then gives all of them sweets and gose away by saying bye and thank you to Bhide

Anyways the males actually think that yeah GOPAL is right

On the other hand at night Bhide kinda of scolds sonu by saying she should help them out more sonu beinging smarter tries to argue but understands

Goli and gogi get a light talk by sodhi and hathi about how they should fouscus on there works

But tapu gets the harshest talk where jethalal scolds him abit but like always champk comes in middle and saves his grandson anyways tapu now has decided he will do the Ganesh Chaturthi stuff with his friends and prove gopal wrong

Now to do a huge celebration they need money so they go to ask for money at multiple places but get rejected

So at one time they go to a guy named mr Rajan who is a businessman he says he will give them 3 lakh however if they are not able to muster up that much money he will take 3 lakh from each of there families

They agree

Now with 3 lakh they do a very good celebration there Ganesh Chaturthi becomes the best in the whole area everyone from other socities to even chalu pandey come to this

Now they haad collected alot of money like around 12 lakh so they were going to give it Rajan while they were on there way sone robbers came and stole the money from them they were suprised shocked secard but they had to go to the society anyways when they reach it

Rajan was here to ask for his 3 lakh the parnets asked what 3 lakh Rajan explained how tapu sena took 3 lakh from him the parnets were shocked but then sodhi reminded them that alot of money has been collected so why dont we give him 3 lakh from 12 lakh but then tapu reveals how they lost 12 lakh from robbers the parnets were shocked now Rajan explains and tells them to give 3 lakh each they try to argue 3 lakh is a big amount but he give them the agreement tapu sonu goli gogi sighed

Now all of them gave 3 lakh besides Bhide his 3 lakh were given by jethalal now after Rajan leaves tapu sena gets a huge scolding even champak scolds them hugely all of them Bhide has decided to take therr childrens away from tapu Bhide scolds jethalal and takes sonu with him

But now after the adults leave these 4 tapu gogi and goli go outside the society to wander what to do now as they were walking they saw Rajan talking to some guys those were the same goons Rajan was giving them 2 lakh from the 12 lakh he had and he explained to goons how foolish those kids were he tricked them he was the one who did this and now he has gain a such succuss he gave them 3 lakh and got 12 lakh in return now tapu sena got angry after seeing this they go back and tell there parnets who after hearing this are angry all of them call Bhide and tell him the truth but Bhide refuses to acknowledge but after some hirady privarthan Bhide agrees

Now they all HAVE TO DO A STONG OPREATION AGAINST RAJAN

Which will be explained in part 2 of arc 1

As I dont want to make this long

Anyways uhh guys how was part 1 how would much would u rate it out 10

If anyone of us were writers or directors if the tmkoc set

We would atleast make the show decent enough and tolerable

I am aware that writing is a very difficult work

But how how can I respect the morden tmkoc writers when there are shit like CHAMPAKLAL IN PAKISTAN

OR VILLAINS NAMED CHUNILAl(wow they rhyme goodly)

All I am saying is we guys can really make the show better then atleast ACID