Please help.any ideas on improvements
Any advice much appreciated
Any advice much appreciated
🎙 VOICEOVER (timed + tone)
0:00 — (no voice — birds only)
0:03 — (calm) At the start of lockdown… Kererū returns… like it always has.
0:06 — (soft) Korimako singing…
0:09 — (quiet, observant) A flash of wings…
0:11 — (gentle) Pīwakawaka swoops in… takes a feather.
0:14 — (slow, soft) A small moment… easy to miss.
0:17 — (pause — just birds)
0:19 — (reflective) But to me…
0:21 — (steady) Nature was teaching something simple:
0:23 — (firmer) Stay together.
0:25 — Share.
0:27 — Take care of each other.
0:29 — (soft close) Especially in uncertain times.
0:32 — (fade voice — birds continue)
📝 CAPTION (X post)
Filmed at the start of lockdown.
The world paused… Nature didn’t.
Three native birds. One small moment. A simple lesson — Stay together. Share. Take care of each other.
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