Some tips specifically about establishing the world building without directly telling the audience, or pacing, would be appreciated. The genre is fantasy and mystery in modern day with a little slice of life.
Some tips specifically about establishing the world building without directly telling the audience, or pacing, would be appreciated.
The genre is fantasy and mystery in modern day with a little slice of life.
Both chaotic and loyal. I could see them being street performers with the roaches for a hot minute.
I mean, I know it’s probably not her first time with Angel leaving as she said, “Trust me, I’ve done this before.” However, how many times has this happened just for her to ask “What if not this time?” That sounds pretty painful.
Also, she now has this long distance relationship with Sir Pentious and I wonder if it’ll have its disadvantages. Not saying they’ll break up.
What do y’all think?
Even though Alastor has his shadow henchmen to help around, they still have a lot of guests and he’s not the most humane host.
I think it would be interesting to explore the hotel hiring new characters, even if they’re not our main focus. I mean, I could see it being a little complicated since our main staff like Charlie, Vaggi, Husk, etc are doing this for free. Maybe some more mellow hell born or sinners that are improving themselves.
I could see Charlie eager to have more hands to help and Vaggi insisting on doing the interviews thinking her girlfriend would just say yes to everyone.
I have an idea for a licensed therapist sinner who used to scam patients on Earth, expose them, or even blackmail them. So maybe they’re working towards redemption themselves.
What do you think? What are your ideas for more staff?
On one hand, I would say Vaggi since the point was Charlie wasn’t listening and obsessing over people’s opinions of her. Plus, Charlie could’ve been less aggressive to them.
On the other hand, going behind Charlie’s back to ask her dad for help when they’re still patching up their father and daughter relationship was kind of a crappy move. We know she had good intentions though, like Charlie.