u/WinEducational2340

I've been building up a nameless sci-fi about teenage soldiers and children hijacking a rejected but still functional Battlestar ship and escape their warring Solar System in search of a new home. They're lead by a seventeen year old Commander and my idea is that he's very mature and humble and never seeking out glory, only the survival of those under him while being a shrewd judge of character and surroundings but would it realistically work out;

The Commander (17): Despite being a deadly competent soldier, he's the humble, reluctant High Commander who just see himself as just a Mission Commander, never seeking glory or gain, only make sure there's no casualties but take full responsibility for the safety of The Deserters.

Whenever he do questionable decisions he humbly learns from them and listen and consider when his crew criticize him and are able to come up with compromises.

Despite insisting the opposite about his heroics, brushing them off as just duties or make sure those under his charge live for another day, The Commander is a very competent and sympathetic leader who only seek out the competence in people he work with and he's showned to be a good reader of character and situations which helped him see his former captor The Cyborg being blackmailed with the latter's ten year old sister as a hostage and against his judgment The Commander didn't see an enemy but a victim which convinced The Cyborg to trust him in order to save the former's sister and during the rescue infiltration to save the girl, was about to shoot the last enemy lab staff member, which would become The Medic, whom he could read was filled with regret and The Cyborg's sister vouched for her causing The Commander to spare the woman who immediately defected to their side.

The Commander never looking for glory only the safety of others are the crush of The Medic and are at first oblivious but eventually returned her feelings.

One in-universe to justify inter species breedings, especially in a future setting, is that after first contact and handshake with aliens the humans uses the advanced medical technology exchange to do biological re-adjustments on themselves in order to have children with their new alien friends, whether it's full-born or hatched from eggs, and making sure to give birth to full blood like the child can either be full human or full alien. Even making that a gay couple can have biological children, like a lesbian can make her girlfriend pregnant and making male pregnancy possible.

That's how how I would reconstruct it.

And before being called out, let me remind you, it's science fiction with empathy of "FICTION" like in when people are complaining about the action in The Matrix which, I remind you, takes place in the cyberspace where one can just rewrite and cheat-coding the environment.

Ever since I saw Cesare Borgia declaring himself invincible—even in his final moments in Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood—I’ve exaggerated that concept for maximum drama and horror.

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I want to create a character who is a racist and sexist bigot that hates how modern progress benefits minority groups. The moment he gains even an ounce of power, he declares himself "The One True God."

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If this character is a prince who gets crowned as the new king, his first act parallels the Taliban's 2021 takeover. He turns his country into an Amish-style North Korea, revokes all rights for women and minorities, bans and destroys all modern technology down to the last wire, and forces his subjects to speak in Shakespearean English. He also plans to ban and destroy every piece of evidence of the multiverse and parallel Earths—eventually destroying those alternate realities and all other planets until only the Sun, Earth, and the Moon remain for him to rule.

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I even incorporated elements from various other antagonists:

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Baraggan from Bleach: Believing he has conquered everything, he reacts with utter disbelief when people show up with advanced technology and claim to be from an infinite multiverse.

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El Capitan from DuckTales (Golden Sun arc): A man who lived for 400 years on sheer greed and willpower: the villain believing he "won't be stopped by any man, god, devil, angel, demon, heaven, earth, hell, life, death, time, or space"—that he is inevitable.

​Speech Option 1

​"Look not away! Thou art witnessing the rise of a new King... nay, a God. A God of all creation! Behold the dawn of His New World Order, and the end of this multiversal blasphemy! All heathens beyond Our Kingdom who dare exist alongside their betters shall perish! So sayeth We, The One True God!"

​Speech Option 2

​"How disappointing. This realm should exist under a New World Order, not under this abomination called progress. Women and the blasphemous filth of foreign lands—who dare walk side by side as equals with their superior, the white man—run rampant in their delusions. Regardless, We shall reshape this world as it was meant to be. We shall rule. For that is what a God must do!

​Look not away! Thou witnesseth the rise of a God, and the dawn of His New World Order! We shall rule this realm... thou shalt not stop Us! A mere ant cannot stand in Our path! Our body, Our mind, Our very essence—they shall never perish, nor shall We be denied what is rightfully Ours! We are inevitable! So sayeth We, The One True God!"

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​Here is a scene set before the coronation, where a group discovers the future tyrant's plans. Written on parchment with quill and ink as a statement of his archaic ideology, the contents reveal the true threat:

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John read through the ink-stained parchment—written by hand instead of printed on modern paper. The sheer cruelty of the contents made him realize this was a deeply dangerous man who would stop at nothing. Lifting his head, John stared at the others, his face frozen in incredulous horror.

​"He's willing to destroy entire solar systems and erase the entire multiverse just so our Earth and Sun are all that remain for him to rule," John whispered. "He wants to enforce his bigotry on everything—turning the world into an Amish North Korea!"

Harry watched with fond amusement how Hermione gaped wide eyed at the towering bookcases going all the way up to the high ceiling of The Potter library until she saw the showroom displays for a bedroom, bathroom and a kitchen.

"What's the idea with those showroom displ-"she started until she turned and saw the mischievous grin on Harry's face and understood that he practically had foreseen that she'd never leave the library and had turned it to a ready flat for her

Swat!

"Very funny, you prat!" grumbled she with an unamused frown as she had smacked Harry on the shoulder.

Harry just grinned while rubbing his sore spot. Definitely worth it.

The battle at The Department of Mysteries in the fifth book work as a realistic connection and origin to give characters new abilities, forms or even displace them in another fictional universe for crossovers, given all the unknown artifacts getting destroyed by spells or characters crashing into them during the chaos.

Just for variety, how would viewers react to a K-Drama protagonist living more vintage with antique furnace, classic wall papers? And that the protagonist even dresses a little vintage, like Hawaiian shirts with cut jeans shorts on very hot days, or like in the 70s, 80s and 90s, even the classic hairstyle instead of the iconic two block cut?