u/ZTheRockstar

Sample is Sail by Awolnation

still got some mixing to do and vocals. Awolnation Sail sample

Got a verse on it here are the overall lyrics. Took a while to get a verse to match energy in and flow in back into the hook. It'll need a mix down, but I want to see what people think of the verse first before continuing

[Hook]

You're a shining star. No matter where you are.

Living in a dream, (of) where you're gonna be.

Girl a shining star. Hope you don't go too far.

I just gotta know, you're down for sure.

You're a shining star

[Verse]

Yea, we gone keep climbing. Rising to the top now we gone stay shining

They say that it's all about your timing. You grind so hard so you'll be headlining

Out the door, see me no more, but you know where you are.

It's in your heart

Just play the part.

You know what to do...

Girl, you're gonna push through cause....

[Hook]

You're a shining star. No Matter where you are.

Living in a dream, (of) where you're gonna be.

Girl a shining star. Hope you don't go too far.

I just gotta know, you're down for sure.

[Solo/Bridge]

Doo doo doo, doo doo

Doo doo doo, doo doo...

Been writing this verse for like 3+ weeks now. Suffered a big writers block. Let me know if it's any good. I'm wanting to sing it in my higher voice and don't want to change the key as it'll mess with the production and set me back. I can do a cleaner take on it, voice was a little scratchy this morning singing high; some notes asre flat and some lyrics are fixed. I'd imagine doing it live in a half step or whole step down. The bridge really just follows the guitar solos melody

[Hook]

You're a shining star. No matter where you are.

Living in a dream, (of) where you're gonna be.

Girl a shining star. Hope you don't go too far.

I just gotta know, you're down for sure.

You're a shining star

[Verse]

Yea, we gone keep climbing. Rising to the top now we gone stay shining

They say that it's all about your timing. You grind so hard so you'll be headlining

Out the door, see me no more, but you know where you are.

It's in your heart

Just play the part.

You know what to do...

Girl, you're gonna go far cause....

[Hook]

You're a shining star. No Matter where you are.

Living in a dream, (of) where you're gonna be.

Girl a shining star. Hope you don't go too far.

I just gotta know, you're down for sure.

[Solo/Bridge]

Doo doo doo, doo doo

Doo doo doo, doo doo...