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my new game is out- https://www.roblox.com/games/125447769223322/Dumb-Ways-to-OOF#!/about
Need suggestions to make it better and reviews-https://www.roblox.com/games/125447769223322/Dumb-Ways-to-OOF#!/about
I just started writing like a week ago i have alot of random ideas mainly when i am walking or something boring. I just want to write them all but i cant as there is only so much one can write down with a limited time.
Ok so now that is out of the way i will get onto introductions. I am 19 year old (M) college student so i most likely wont be available during exams and a bit before the exams.
What i am looking for are people who are interesting in writing and would love to give suggestions not proper critique but just like this feels kinda off and stuff like that. I would prefer discord but other platforms or even reddit work if you cant. I sometimes feel like i cant communicate my ideas with others and thats why i am looking for people to share ideas with.
My first project is a anime style light novel. Its probably going to have alot of chapters depending on how it goes. I plan on publishing it once i am done with a decent amount like 40 or 50 chapters so i can keep weekly schedule.
*Genre/s: All genres welcome, but I’m currently writing an anime style Light Novel (my first project)
*Goals/expectations: I want to learn from others and will gladly read your work and give honest feedback.
* experience level: Beginner (basically starting) I got a great light novel concept and starting writing
* Meeting place: Anything works (discord highly preferable)
* Max size: smaller groups max upto 10
I am writing a long light novel (its my first story) i want to understand how to express different emotions through characters and pacing and stuff like that to evolve. I will be able to learn alot with others assistance and also would love to give my feedback
I am a college student so during exam times it might be hard but otherwise would be free to read.