feedback on my two common app essay ideas
im scared to start writing if these arent good so i want to check if these would be good to write about. im actually just scared to start period.. dont even know which prompts im using these are just topics ive floated. constructive critisis please
#1: summer camp - i went to this YMCA camp four times in my childhood and am going back for an internship position this summer. i had to interview for it but i am also paying, its not like a crazy feat. im going to do a lot of service which i thought i could tie in to being Vice President of Key Club and other leadership and community service experiences. i would also write about how camp has seen me in different eras of my life or something. camp does really mean a lot to me and it has since the start. i wouldnt be able to weite this until august though but i have time then kind of.
#2: dyeing my hair - i dyed my hair pink a hear ago. the process that led me to it shows that i am adventurous, curious, brave, etc etc. i hated it for a few days and grew to love it. also can say that it did change me a lot in how much i cars about what people think of me. this one feels weaker but im sure theres something. academically i could connect it to persistence or something.