u/tombran12341

Heya, I'm a 2D animator looking for help with my scripts. I've been making animated shorts lately (less than 30 seconds) and posting on YouTube and tiktok.

I've been getting into the writing aspect a lot more over the past few months, writing 2-3 minute scripts that I plan to spend months animating etc.

I want someone to look over my super short scripts (1-3 pages), and give me some feedback and whatever ideas they think would work best etc. Im trying to make the scripts super good and packed with good and funny ideas and stuff.

Obviously you'd be credited in the final animation as a writer for your help.

Here's some of my work:

Recent one I posted to reddit: https://www.reddit.com/r/animation/comments/1ub0kzb/a_guy_goes_for_a_walk/

And here's my animation showreel: www.theoswebsite.com

Thank you :)

Heya, I'm a 2D animator looking for help with my scripts. I've been making animated shorts lately (less than 30 seconds) and posting on YouTube and tiktok.

I've been getting into the writing aspect a lot more over the past few months, writing 2-3 minute scripts that I plan to spend months animating etc.

I want someone to look over my super short scripts (1-3 pages), and give me some feedback and whatever ideas they think would work best etc. Im trying to make the scripts super good and packed with good and funny ideas and stuff.

Obviously you'd be credited in the final animation as a writer for your help.

Here's some of my work:

Recent one I posted to reddit.

And here's my animation showreel.

Thank you :)

Hi, I've been animating for a long time and recently got into writing my own scripts. I want to make 2-3 minute shorts to post on youtube.

I've written this script, it's missing a lot of details but I feel like there's enough to get feedback on for now before put in all the little ideas in there, I just want to know if its working before I finalise it.

I'd really appreciate some feedback on how I can make this the best it can be, before I go and design, storyboard, animate and colour the whole thing which will take at least a solid month of my time.

Here's the script

My goal is to make funny animations that do well on youtube, get a lot of views and positive comments and subscribers. I've looked at countless animated shorts on youtube and decided that this kind of thing, like a parody, with a good general story structure and jokes, and dark comedy, is the kind of thing I want to make and think would do well.

I chose world of warcraft because its something thats close to my heart, and its quite dark because that's the kind of stuff I like.

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post my animations on here, but you can find them through my reddit posts and my link on my reddit profile.

Thank you so much and I'd be really grateful for some advice and direction and ways to make my script awesome.

Hi, I'm a long time animator who's been getting into writing quite a lot lately.

I've read and learned a fair bit about the subject, read a few books about it etc.I've been working on writing scripts for animated shorts for me to animate and upload to youtube.

I'm just looking for someone to read my someone to read my scripts and give me some good feedback about how I can improve before I spend weeks/months animating them.
At the moment I've got one that I'm happy to get some feedback on.

You can see my animation portfolio through the link on my reddit profile.
Obviously whoever helps me will receive credit in the video.

Thanks so much for reading, I'd really appreciate some help.

Hi, I'm a long time animator who's been getting into writing quite a lot lately.

I've read and learned a fair bit about the subject, read a few books about it etc.I've been working on writing scripts for animated shorts for me to animate and upload to youtube.

I'm just looking for someone to read my someone to read my scripts and give me some good feedback about how I can improve before I spend weeks/months animating them.
At the moment I've got one that I'm happy to get some feedback on.

You can see my animation portfolio through the link on my reddit profile.
Obviously whoever helps me will receive credit in the video.

Thanks so much for reading, I'd really appreciate some help.