u/AnimalCannibal9

1. Meet the Spartans - The Spartans are all portrayed as being bisexual, as they actually were in real life.

2. Date Movie - The movie’s main character played by Alyson Hannigan partially parodies Bridget Jones from Bridget Jones’ diary, and is actually portrayed as being overweight as she was in the book (though this is only for the first 20 minutes of the movie).

I’ve posted this a couple of times now and I’m kinda bummed out that nobody seemed to have given me any feedback beyond the first two pages. I’ve only gotten two that (seemingly) wasn’t and one out of two of them gave me advice that don’t really apply to the spoof genre.

I just want to know if you find the script funny and the parody clever.

Also, here’s the logline; “After developing unexplained psychic powers, an ordinary teenager must survive high school, supernatural monsters, melodramatic romances, prestige-TV trauma, and at least three wildly unnecessary subplots in this riotous send-up of modern teen dramas”.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk

I’ve posted this a couple of times now and I’m kinda bummed out that nobody seemed to have given me any feedback beyond the first two pages. I’ve only gotten two that (seemingly) wasn’t and one out of two of them gave me advice that don’t really apply to the spoof genre.

I just want to know if you find the script funny and the parody clever.

Also, here’s the logline; “After developing unexplained psychic powers, an ordinary teenager must survive high school, supernatural monsters, melodramatic romances, prestige-TV trauma, and at least three wildly unnecessary subplots in this riotous send-up of modern teen dramas”.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk

I’ve posted this a couple of times now and I’m kinda bummed out that nobody seemed to have given me any feedback beyond the first two pages. I’ve only gotten two that (seemingly) wasn’t and one out of two of them gave me advice that don’t really apply to the spoof genre.

I just want to know if you find the script funny and the parody clever.

Also, here’s the logline; “After developing unexplained psychic powers, an ordinary teenager must survive high school, supernatural monsters, melodramatic romances, prestige-TV trauma, and at least three wildly unnecessary subplots in this riotous send-up of modern teen dramas”.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk

Title: “The Summer I was Not Okay With the Thirteen Strange Things It was doing to my Pretty Little Yellow Jacket”.

Genre: Comedy Spoof mocking numerous Teen Dramas, particularly I’m Not Okay With This, Stranger Things and Euphoria.

Pages: 49

Logline: “Bethany Yesvak is an ordinary cynical teenager whose life is turned upside down when she discovers she has telekinetic powers. As she struggles to keep her abilities a secret, she must also survive the everyday chaos of high school, family, and growing up”.

\-A lot of inspirations from the GOOD spoof movies of the 2000s such as the Scary Movies, Not Another Teen Movie and Superhero Movie.

\-My main concerns is if you think the script is funny and you think the parody works well.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk

Title: “The Summer I was Not Okay With the Thirteen Strange Things It was doing to my Pretty Little Yellow Jacket”.

Genre: Comedy Spoof mocking numerous Teen Dramas, particularly I’m Not Okay With This, Stranger Things and Euphoria.

Pages: 49

Logline: “Bethany Yesvak is an ordinary cynical teenager whose life is turned upside down when she discovers she has telekinetic powers. As she struggles to keep her abilities a secret, she must also survive the everyday chaos of high school, family, and growing up”.

\-A lot of inspirations from the GOOD spoof movies of the 2000s such as the Scary Movies, Not Another Teen Movie and Superhero Movie.

\-My main concerns is if you think the script is funny and you think the parody works well.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk

1. Smiling Friends - At one point in the third to last episode, Charlie randomly exclaims “Don’t ever touch me” to his Girlfriend Zoey and we never ever find out what the beef between those two is about. Like why do they suddenly hate eachother? They seemed fine in the finale of Season 2, did Zoey get an abortion against Charlie’s wishes? Oh, Zoey got an abortion against Charlie’s wishes didn’t she?

2. Ethel and Ernest - I don’t have an image of this specific but oh well. While the entire town celebrates the end of World War II, one guy, Tom seems upset. Ernest tries to cheer him up but he reveals his son died in the war, like this is the first and last time we ever see this character. It’s kind of sad. Scrap that, it’s really sad, might I say FUCKING sad.

Title: “The Summer I was Not Okay With the Thirteen Strange Things It was doing to my Pretty Little Yellow Jacket”.

Genre: Comedy Spoof mocking numerous Teen Dramas, particularly I’m Not Okay With This, Stranger Things and Euphoria.

Pages: 49

Logline: “Bethany Yesvak is an ordinary cynical teenager whose life is turned upside down when she discovers she has telekinetic powers. As she struggles to keep her abilities a secret, she must also survive the everyday chaos of high school, family, and growing up”.

-A lot of inspirations from the GOOD spoof movies of the 2000s such as the Scary Movies, Not Another Teen Movie and Superhero Movie.

-My main concerns is if you think the script is funny and you think the parody works well.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17AjMJq49FW\_9ZhzY2Yvc\_JxThW1s2UrW/view?usp=drivesdk