is the first page of my book passable?

is the first page of my book passable?

its said that the success of your book depends on how well your first page is written, so i really did not know what to write. still, i kept on writng.

(the mc is supposed to be borderline crazy in this book)

u/AreaLeast4026 — 6 days ago

GIRLS ARE REAL

-bleep-

-bleep-

H E L L O

I AM AN EMBASSADER FROM GIRLAND.

YOU HAVE (1) MESSAGE FROM THE BOSS.

-ding-

*"*GIRLS ARE REAL. GIRLS HAVE SOULS. ANYONE SUGGESTING OTHERWISE SHALL BE LABELED FOE OF GIRLAND"

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u/AreaLeast4026 — 8 days ago

[For Hire]

I am a highschooler who also draws, and am trying to earn a few extra bucks here and there to finance my studies. message me or dm on insta (@inkisyum) if you're interested.

u/AreaLeast4026 — 11 days ago