
Can someone critique my logic?
I need to present this one pager to a search fund tomorrow and I need to know if there’s any weak points. Thanks in advance.

I need to present this one pager to a search fund tomorrow and I need to know if there’s any weak points. Thanks in advance.
I was told that most of his internships result in a net negative for the company. The call itself went good but, he asked me if to create a one pager on the sector he targets which are energy and utilities and then create 3 sub categories that I was interested in.
Any idea how to structure this so I don’t look like a complete idiot?
I was told that most of his internships result in a net negative for the company. The call itself went good but, he asked me if to create a one pager on the sector he targets which are energy and utilities and then create 3 sub categories that I was interested in.
Any idea how to structure this so I don’t look like a complete idiot?
Subject: NYU student looking for internship
Hi name,
My name is name, and I’ll be studying Economics at NYU CAS. I’m interested in business acquisitions, ETA, and lower-middle-market investing, especially within the DFW area.
My internship experience spans fintech and private lending, giving me exposure to financial analysis, credit, and deal-related work. I’d be grateful to connect briefly and learn more about company name, your acquisition process, and whether there may be any internship, analyst, or project-based opportunities where I could contribute.
LinkedIn link
Best,
Name
Resume.word document
Sent this to around 80-90 firms in the dfw area in the past week
Let me know what I should change
Prepping for summer 2027 Investment Banking internships
Lost traction of one of the turns but good thing ABS recorrected
Let me know what else I need to change
Cooked resume or bad luck?
40 cold emails and four people saying no so far
Context: had a brief call with I trailer leasing company that I was referenced by the company’s servicing department
I would be moving the trailers around from lot to lot
I’m 19 so I tried going through an internship route, but the ceo got cold feet so I sent him this email.
When dealing with shippers who, (in the nicest way) don’t seem to be the brightest, do you guys refrain from using any corporate lingo?
Full pay for both schools as an incoming sophomore transfer.
Career outcome will be in Investment Banking.
Posted here a couple weeks ago of ordering the wrong harness which led to the windows being down for a couple weeks.
Because of this lol a cat decided to have its baby in the back of the car and left it there for a day and never came back.
So now I got a free cat
Give me some name recommendations
Sits at a much lower profile but, much the detector receives much more jumps and vibrations. I’ll have to drive around with it a little more to truly see how bad it jumps around. I might just go back to my suction cup
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