Not sure if this is the right sub reddit? But I'm looking for someone to critique my fantasy short story (not finished)
I know it's bad and I'm lowk embarrassed to share it but I need advice on pacing and better dialouge
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZvPNZ5DZJEHuom9WFS0Oi0AuaqdIvepJ1ISZt1nkOEw/edit?usp=drivesdk
Sorry in advance for some of my bad spelling. I'm 14M, and most of the people are around 14 and M
I've been in a. Server for a little while we were planning on making an scripted minecraft server with some people. Say the person who made it call them Jerry. And the other people group b.
So group b and me were recording a video and I hsd to lesve for a little while. When I come back I check the Discord server and find Jerry didn't give us permission to record and threatened to ban us all if we did it again. Instead it ended with them being banned from their own server. We recorded the video anyways and now still record the same series without them and I think their recording their own series with different people. I diddnt know we weren't supposed to record snd I don't think group b knew either. I'm just looking for advice on what I should do I feel guilty about it, wondering if I should apologize to Jerry or just move on. Jerry has been kind of a friend to me for the last few weeks but months before we met on a minecraft server.
Minecraft pc
I am planning to build a pc once I get a job. Il use it for literally just minecraft and maybe some other small games. Il be running minecraft with shaders and mods like tectonic or render distance mods. I don't mind if it runs at 60 fps or a little lower. All I really care about would be the price atleast under thousand (if that's possible). I'm also fine buying used parts.
Tldr
Must run minecraft on shaders and generation mods
Under 1 k (if possible)
Can buy used parts
1080p min
Country of purchase Canada
Have a mouse not very good, maybe a new one
Need a keyboard and pc case
Don't care about rgb or how the case looks.
I've been looking/reading around how to make an alter I feel like I've got a good understanding of it, most of them I've seen they say to leave like perfume or some form of scent or something to the god (eg Aeolus). I just want to know if that's nesscary I have allergy to alot of smells I get headaches, do I need to leave something like that?