u/Electrical_Relief_52

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Do you guys think I should add the house, bush/garden, and fence from my old sketches? I’m planning to add flowers and was thinking of making them a purplish pink to match the sky and help frame the piece (kind of with a bokeh effect). I also haven’t colored the mom yet. What color clothes do you think would work best for color harmony? Does the facial expression read well for her? Also, should the mom and the flowers/bush/fence be in focus like the lion and girl, or slightly blurred? Also, do you think cropping the bottom with more tape will help with composition, or will the flowers help with that? Any other critiques or suggestions are welcome.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 6 hours ago

Need advice on how to finish my drawing

Could I please get some advice/critique on my drawing composition?

Right now, the background trees are very bokeh/blurry. In my original sketch, I also had a house in the background, and I’m wondering if I should still include it and make it blurry as well.

I’m also debating whether the flowers in the foreground should be bokeh too. My idea was to keep the lion, girl, mom, and fence area in focus, kind of like those cinematic/fancy portrait photos where the subject is sharp but the foreground and background are softly blurred.

Does that sound like it would work visually, or would it be too much blur overall? Any advice or critique is welcome.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 12 days ago

Need advice on how to finish my drawing

Could I please get some advice/critique on my drawing composition?

Right now, the background trees are very bokeh/blurry. In my original sketch, I also had a house in the background, and I’m wondering if I should still include it and make it blurry as well.

I’m also debating whether the flowers in the foreground should be bokeh too. My idea was to keep the lion, girl, mom, and fence area in focus, kind of like those cinematic/fancy portrait photos where the subject is sharp but the foreground and background are softly blurred.

Does that sound like it would work visually, or would it be too much blur overall? Any advice or critique is welcome.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 12 days ago

Need advice on how to finish my drawing

Could I get some advice/critique on my drawing composition?

Right now, the background trees are very bokeh/blurry. In my original sketch, I also had a house in the background, and I’m wondering if I should still include it and make it blurry as well.

I’m also debating whether the flowers in the foreground should be bokeh too. My idea was to keep the lion, girl, mom, and fence area in focus, kind of like those cinematic/fancy portrait photos where the subject is sharp but the foreground and background are softly blurred.

Does that sound like it would work visually, or would it be too much blur overall? Any advice or critique is welcome.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 12 days ago

I know it's stylized but does the proportions look right and does the people look alright? Is there anything I should change/add/remove? Also do you guys still think I should crop the bottom as it'll look more like my original sketch? Theres supposed to be flowers there. I'm just wondering cuz I already cropped a bunch with the tape. Also, other critiques/advice is welcome

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 15 days ago

Question about artstyle/proportions and composition

I know it's stylized but does the proportions look right and does the people look alright? Is there anything I should change/add/remove? Also do you guys still think I should crop the bottom as it'll look more like my original sketch? Theres supposed to be flowers there. I'm just wondering cuz I already cropped a bunch with the tape. Also, other critiques/advice is welcome

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 15 days ago

Hello, here's what it looks rn. I know it's stylized but does the proportions look right and does the people look alright? Is there anything I should change/add/remove? Also do you guys still think I should crop the bottom as it'll look more like my original sketch? I'm just wondering cuz I already cropped a bunch with the tape.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 15 days ago

Hello, could I get some help please?

I started on my big sketch and It’s a bit stylized, but I feel like the anatomy and proportions especially the lion’s limbs are off. The composition also feels empty at the bottom. My original sketch had it much smaller should I crop it or fill it in with the flowers?

Any other critique/advice is welcome. Also, if you’d like, feel free to draw over it so I can see what to fix. I really want my final painting to turn out good.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 17 days ago

Hello, could I get some help please?

I started on my big sketch and It’s a bit stylized, but I feel like the anatomy and proportions especially the lion’s limbs are off. The composition also feels empty at the bottom. My original sketch had it much smaller should I crop it or fill it in with the flowers?

Any other critique/advice is welcome. Also, if you’d like, feel free to draw over it so I can see what to fix. I really want my final painting to turn out good.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 17 days ago

Hello, could I get some help please?

I started on my big sketch and It’s a bit stylized, but I feel like the anatomy and proportions especially the lion’s limbs are off. The composition also feels empty at the bottom. My original sketch had it much smaller should I crop it or fill it in with the flowers?

Any other critique/advice is welcome. Also, if you’d like, feel free to draw over it so I can see what to fix. I really want my final painting to turn out good.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 17 days ago

Hello, could I get some help please?

I started on my big sketch and It’s a bit stylized, but I feel like the anatomy and proportions especially the lion’s limbs are off. The composition also feels empty at the bottom. My original sketch had it much smaller should I crop it or fill it in with the flowers?

Any other critique/advice is welcome. Also, if you’d like, feel free to draw over it so I can see what to fix. I really want my final painting to turn out good.

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 17 days ago
▲ 1 r/edge+1 crossposts

I was able to download them before with no issues but suddenly every time I try to download from Canva this happnens. Also, BTW I signed up for the free trial thing to see if that'll fix it somehow but nope nothing works. Here's a link of what it looks like. https://imgur.com/a/bvwQtkd

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 20 days ago

I've never really had an issue with it. I can load all of my games/emulators and it updates everything. The only issue I have is that I really can't exit a game unless the game itself has its own feature to exit.

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u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 20 days ago
▲ 16 r/howto

Hello, I have a rucking backpack that I load with about 90 lbs of weight, but it keeps unzipping on its own even in the middle sections. I use a belt to strap it tight to my body, but it still happens. How can I prevent this and how to fix it?

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 22 days ago

Hello, I have a rucking backpack that I load with about 90 lbs of weight, but it keeps unzipping on its own even in the middle sections. I use a belt to strap it tight to my body, but it still happens. How can I prevent this?

I also use the backpack for weighted push-ups, and sometimes it slips off and hits my head. Does anyone have suggestions, or recommendations for a better backpack?

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 22 days ago

Hello, I have a ROG Ally Z1E and I've been thinking about switching to Bazzite or SteamOS, but I'm really unsure. I'm not a tech guy, and I find a lot of this stuff complicated and confusing, so I'm trying to understand the risks before I do anything. For my purposes, I want to get better performance and an overall better gaming experience in the most simple way possible.

My concerns are that I won't be able to play all of my games, such as Jurassic World Evolution 3 from Xbox (I DO NOT HAVE GAMEPASS. I own the game). I've heard that with Bazzite or SteamOS, Xbox games don't work, along with other games that use anti-cheat, such as PVZ GW1/2, I believe.

Another problem I'm worried about is not being able to search the web to download games, or that the games I download won't work.

I'm also concerned about my emulators not being able to work because they aren't Steam games, such as CEMU, Dolphin, Ryubing, and RetroArch. I also use Armoury Crate to get motion controls with custom profiles and the fan curves.

My last concern is updates. I'm afraid that if I use one of these OS, I won't be able to update my ROG Ally when it needs updates and the ASUS, AMD updates.

Overall, I just want better performance and a smoother gaming experience, but I don't want to lose access to my games or break anything.

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u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 24 days ago
▲ 6 r/ArtCrit+1 crossposts

Hello, should I leave it as is with the light-yellow color or perhaps something more orangish or reddish. I thought about that because on the color wheel those colors complement the greenish/bluish fabric. I was also thinking about maybe a purple color because it's a split complementary, but I think that may conflict with the warm light cool shadow thing

Also, I'm still working on the bottom right corner. I think I know what to do there

u/Electrical_Relief_52 — 26 days ago