Advice for writing Polytrix more “balanced” between all three?
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Advice for writing Polytrix more “balanced” between all three?

So, I recently wrote my first proper Polytrix one-shot, and mostly like how it turned out. However, with even less than 2k words, I noticed something: it was extremely unbalanced in the sense that Zoey was barely in it. She complimented Rumi a few times, but the main focus of the one-shot was on Rumi and Mira as Zoey did her own thing.

And thinking about it, most Polytrix ideas/scenarios I have or have written (platonically) involve Mira and Rumi together having tough or intense conversations. Or even just…normal or flirty conversations. But Zoey is often largely absent from their meaningful scenes, or when she is there, she’s praising or comforting Rumi with Mira or other characters. Nothing really feels uniquely her.

I think that part of this may be because I find Zoey the least interesting of the three women. I don’t hate her, I just don’t really ever have an interest in writing from her POV.

All that is to say: does anyone have advice for balancing interactions and the like between the three, specifically to include Zoey without making her seem OOC? (Cause like, having hard conversations isn’t her thing, really.)

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 6 days ago
▲ 1.2k r/RuJinu+1 crossposts

Zoey waking up at one a.m. to hear Rumi and Jinu screaming “WHY DOES IT FEEL RIGHT EVERY TIME I LET YOU IN?!”

What could they be doing?

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 6 days ago

Rumi waking up at one a.m. to hear Mira and Zoey screaming “BODY ON BODY, IM NAUGHTY, NOT EVEN SORRY”

Thank you u/xavierpizza for giving me this idea

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 9 days ago

this action will have consequences (original work, focuses on Rumi and Celine post-movie)

I finally completed my first multi-chaptered kpdh fanfic, and decided to crosspost it here, to anyone interested!

Summary:

It's been weeks since the Idol Awards, weeks since the world almost ended, weeks since Rumi begged--demanded--that Celine kill her as the Honmoon fell apart around them.

Celine has never felt more isolated, texts and calls to Rumi, Mira, and Zoey ignored. She's far more familiar with the bottom of a bottle of liquor then she is with this new era, the new Honmoon, the new philosophy and attitude that Huntrix ushered in and created.

Until a single text pings on her phone.

Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/77545231/chapters/203078426

Rating: T (alcoholism, mentions and discussion of suicide)

Word Count: 29,065

Chapters: 5

Characters: Celine, Rumi, Mira, Zoey, Derpy, Sussie, mentioned Jinu, mentioned Mi-yeong, mentioned Rumi's father, minor appearance of Bobby

Tags: Angst and Feels, Hurt/Comfort, Alcoholic Celine, Complex Celine, Celine and Rumi both need therapy, Flashbacks, One-sided Celine/Mi-yeong, Unreliable Narrators, Mira engaging in Jinu bashing

I hope you enjoy the fic if you choose to read it! Thank you!

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 17 days ago
▲ 9 r/RuJinu

Do you consider Rujinu bi4bi?

Meaning, they’re both bisexual who happen to be in a heterosexual relationship. It’s a semi-popular headcanon and I’m curious as to what you think.

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u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago
▲ 216 r/Polytrix

The creators were real ones for sneaking an almost completely sapphic harem into the movie

I’m loving these dolls, thank goodness they’re articulated

I would’ve had Rumi and Mira holding hands with Jinu stuck with the end of Rumi’s braid, but Rumiras arms weren’t long enough 💔

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago

This is what happens when the two leads of your movie trauma dump like crazy

Imagine a therapist meeting with Rumi and Jinu, but also, imagine the fascinating conversations and debates you could have with the right psychology terms and the like.

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago

Rujinu Photoshoot (that tells a little story)

Posing my Zoemira dolls was super fun, so I decided to play around with my Rumi and Jinu dolls, too.

u/xavierpizza I believe you said you were looking forward to this one 👀

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago

Rujinu Photoshoot (slightly suggestive warning for slides 7-9)

After having fun with my Zoemira photoshoot, I decided to make a nifty little one for Rujinu. Sorry for bad lighting, still trying to get that down! Hope you enjoyed the little “story” the photos tell.

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago
▲ 63 r/RuJinu

Rujinu Photoshoot (slightly suggestive warning for slides 7-9)

After having fun with my Zoemira photoshoot, I decided to make a nifty little one for Rujinu. Sorry for bad lighting, still trying to get that down!

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago
▲ 191 r/Polytrix+1 crossposts

Zoemira headcanon: they bond over having mutual crushes on Celine during their training days

Meanwhile, Rumi is dying of embarrassment when they both put Celine on hear me out cakes (especially since Zoey would likely put Mi-yeong on there, too…)

Speaking of which, given Mi-yeong caught Celine’s eye and Rumi’s dad’s eye, she was clearly “everyone’s type,” too.

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago
▲ 164 r/Polytrix+1 crossposts

Question for Rumira, Zoemira, or Zoerumi shippers: what does the “extra” girl do/have in terms of relationships in your/others’ fanworks or headcanons?

I hope that made sense. Basically, when only two of the three girls are shipped together, what does/do you think the other girl has in terms of relationships? I’ve seen a small amount of Rujinu + Zoemira works, but they are quite rare, and I’ve seen zero Rumira + Zoestery or Zoerumi + Miromabby/Mirabby/Miromance content.

Basically, I am just curious what happens to that third girl in your or others’ content, or even just headcanons.

Note: this is specifically asking people who ship one of the three ships above, NOT Polytrix shippers, who obviously ship all three together.

u/Fantastic-Donut-276 — 1 month ago