Whether it's a few words or a few lines, something you've published, or something you just wrote today, post a small excerpt from your story! You're more than welcome to add context, but it's not necessary. We would ask that you do limit it to no more than a few paragraphs; we're not looking for entire chapters. If you'd like any particular type of feedback on your excerpt, or want to start a discussion about it, feel free!
Whether it's a few words or a few lines, post a small excerpt from your story! You're more than welcome to add context, but it's not necessary. We would ask that you do limit it to no more than a few paragraphs; we're not looking for entire chapters. If you'd like any particular type of feedback on your excerpt, or want to start a discussion about it, feel free!
Whether it's a few words or a few lines, post a small excerpt from your story! You're more than welcome to add context, but it's not necessary. We would ask that you do limit it to no more than a few paragraphs; we're not looking for entire chapters. If you'd like any particular type of feedback on your excerpt, or want to start a discussion about it, feel free!
Whether it be a certain character, a game mechanic, a place, or anything in between, what is something you want to include in your story but, for whatever reason, are struggling with?
Please note that this thread is meant to encourage others to help, so please mention in your reply if you don't want others to give suggestions.
I've been lazy and unlucky with satchels, plus an extended break, but we've finally returned seven thousand satchels!
I took a six month or so break from this game because last time I posted one of these it led to some... interesting discussions.
So, anyway, here's my completed Carnivine, which sits as number ten out of two hundred forty since Unown and Arceus don't count.