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How can I improve this splash art to get to a more professional quality?
This is my oc I designed and I drew a splash art inspired by the LoL style but I feel like there's a lot of aspects that keep it from that level.
Some things I noticed myself was:
- rendering of the ponytail
- background has some perspective issues
- background lacks detailed rendering
- kinda unclear value composition
- unclear visuals to show the characters powers due to a mix of posing and the effect mixing into the background (he has the ability to walk on air and creates ripples he steps on but it's not that visually clear)
If anyone can point out more or give resources to assist I'd greatly appreciate it. Looking for a full no sugar coat breakdown for swift improvement!
This piece took me 9 hours and 40 minutes for reference
u/MiraculouslyGreat — 2 days ago