Rough layout of my 2 page comic. Is the dialogue too much? Critiques on other aspects are also welcome

u/MochaunLive — 10 days ago

Thank you all for the help! Here's the full body design! What do yall think?

Bless the person who reminded me that Neapolitan exists!!!!

u/MochaunLive — 20 days ago

I want to make an ice cream version of my oc. I think rocky road suits him a lot because he is a racer, however as you can see he is white as heck. Should I choose a different flavor or would this be okay?

u/MochaunLive — 21 days ago

Carrie! A new trio member for Meeple!

QUOTES:

"Subsection 22 of Rule 749, Meeple."

"That's an illegal move!"

"Me? Unbalanced? Skill issue."

"You can't do that!"

"Rules rule, Just as much as I do."

"You won fair and square.."

"The Rules Card is my favorite."

"Counter this!"

"*RULES VIOLATION.*"

"*TIMEOUT!*"

"Ah ah, No buts!"

"Bruh. There goes your rep~"

"Not a fan of hypocrites."

u/MochaunLive — 22 days ago
▲ 130 r/ArtJerk

My grim reaper ocs! Criticism NOT accepted because they are NOT cliche whatsoever

/uj i want to jerk but there's nothing to jerk so i'm making fun of my own ocs

u/MochaunLive — 2 months ago

Why do brawlers always look better in loading screen art? The modeling team needs to lock in fr

u/MochaunLive — 2 months ago

It's not exactly christmas, but tell me the worst thing your OC has done and I'll tell you the gift they'll recieve from Nicky.

Nicky is just like your average Santa Claus. The catch? She's a prankster and her gifts will always have a little surprise inside. It could be a pie to your face, or an actual live bomb. I just hope your OCs have been nice this year

u/MochaunLive — 2 months ago

How can I improve this redesign?

I'm redesigning another oc, and this one's ESPECIALLY hard to work with, because the design itself is such a mess

I'm reworking the oc's concept into a strong crystal golem who guards the Crystal Guardian, Diane

u/MochaunLive — 2 months ago