The Hirathean Path...gutted!
I'd read Book One {A Web of Vows and Vengence by Aria Ashbrook} and Book Two of the Hirathean Path series and enjoyed them. Certain bits grated on me, but I was still looking forward to Book Three.
Unfortunately, the third installment {Blood of Truth and Traitor's by Aria Ashbrook}, recently released, was a heaping pile of steaming turd and I DNFd it at 75%.
I'm gutted, so many elements had such promise, new characters and magic, new scenery... and then Ashbrook screwed it all with gushing and sickening relationships and terrible pacing. The new stuff might as well not have existed! Nothing bloody happens that couldn't have been wrapped up in 5 or 6 chapter's, instead of spinning it out for over 40.
And another thing....why do writers feel like they need each of their little cliques to hook up with one another and who all conveniently end up being world ending loves and fated mates? Is this just a tactic to exclude the prospect of new outside characters, or because they're too lazy to nurture a role in the narrative that isn't a romantic one. Ugh!
I need a book that looks beyond the main characters and weaves them in to a more developed storyline... I'm off to peruse the kindle store.
Kind regards
Frustrated from the book chair!!!