u/Sad_Ad1766

It's more of a rough draft of a song i wrote but it's really a poetic confession of a hard time in my life told by feelings from my mental diary. It's very personal.

Can yall guess what the story is about??? I'd like all of yalls interpretation of what it means to you.

\\\[Verse 1\\\]

Whoa oh, feels like, this world's, ending, but in reality its all mine, all in my fucked up head!!! these past 9 months have really fucked me thin!!

My passion's fire, buring thru this town/summer weekly, imagining all the one's i hate, are now all dead, this dead burned hollowed out heart, now am i really dead?

numb as fuck, drain the pressure away from this feeling.

a liter of vodka, a crude blade kiss my wrist to drain this feeling, I'm bleeding weak for you every night,

whoa oh just wanna hear you say goodnight,

die happily to hear it with you by my side,

you and i every night for eternity,

would really like to see,

cuz things just don't feel same,

I miss when I'd hear you say...

\\\[Chorus\\\]

Whoaa ohh

Never quite felt this way before

whoa oh, whoa oh

Never wanna let this feeling go

Whoa oh darling

first time I laid eyes

upon your sweet gaze

precious brown eyed girl

like no other in the world

voice with that sound

melody of an angel

cute little smile I can't deny

whoa oh am I fucking high

no control when the end is fucking nigh

did i straight up imprint

on her? I can't fucking lie

you and i feel tied until the end of time

Wait!! like jacob fucking black???... breaking dawn? is that cringe af?... am I on crack?

fuck, my back!!

yeah, fuck it!! I meant it

sincerely your's

whoa oh

Who cares? even if I could take this deeply ingrained attachment back? nana nana never in million years, no matter, how much, i try, or how it fucking hurts me inside

there's no erasing these primal ties

Whoa oh whoa oh oh...oh...oh

If this is healing? I don't even fucking knowwhoawhoa? but i'll say "whoa oh"

my love, my beloved, cheers to the sweet antebellum, the calm before the storm, cuz I feel there's another war about to rage inside

Whoa oh

one last time, in case i end it all tonight, I miss hearing you say goodnight...

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/36OOs7gJzy

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/IsywP9TPTh

A little rough draft of a autobiographical song/diary poem i wrote after having a dream of the sound of it. Its kinda sad & dark af, but funny as well lol

\\\[Verse 1\\\]

Whoa oh, feels like, this world's, ending, but in reality its all mine, all in my fucked up head!!! these past 9 months have really fucked me thin!!

My passion's fire, buring thru this town/summer weekly, imagining all the one's i hate, are now all dead, this dead burned hollowed out heart, now am i really dead?

numb as fuck, drain the pressure away from this feeling.

a liter of vodka, a crude blade kiss my wrist to drain this feeling, I'm bleeding weak for you every night,

whoa oh just wanna hear you say goodnight,

die happily to hear it with you by my side,

you and i every night for eternity,

would really like to see,

cuz things just don't feel same,

I miss when I'd hear you say...

\\\[Chorus\\\]

Whoaa ohh

Never quite felt this way before

whoa oh, whoa oh

Never wanna let this feeling go

Whoa oh darling

first time I laid eyes

upon your sweet gaze

precious brown eyed girl

like no other in the world

voice with that sound

melody of an angel

cute little smile I can't deny

whoa oh am I fucking high

no control when the end is fucking nigh

did i straight up imprint

on her? I can't fucking lie

you and i feel tied until the end of time

Wait!! like jacob fucking black???... breaking dawn? is that cringe af?... am I on crack?

fuck, my back!!

yeah, fuck it!! I meant it

sincerely your's

whoa oh

Who cares? even if I could take this deeply ingrained attachment back? nana nana never in million years, no matter, how much, i try, or how it fucking hurts me inside

there's no erasing these primal ties

Whoa oh whoa oh oh...oh...oh

If this is healing? I don't even fucking knowwhoawhoa? but i'll say "whoa oh"

my love, my beloved, cheers to the sweet antebellum, the calm before the storm, cuz I feel there's another war about to rage inside

Whoa oh

one last time, in case i end it all tonight, I miss hearing you say goodnight...

A little rough draft of a autobiographical song/diary poem i wrote after having a dream of the sound of it. Its kinda sad & dark af, but funny as well lol

\\\[Verse 1\\\]

Whoa oh, feels like, this world's, ending, but in reality its all mine, all in my fucked up head!!! these past 9 months have really fucked me thin!!

My passion's fire, buring thru this town/summer weekly, imagining all the one's i hate, are now all dead, this dead burned hollowed out heart, now am i really dead?

numb as fuck, drain the pressure away from this feeling.

a liter of vodka, a crude blade kiss my wrist to drain this feeling, I'm bleeding weak for you every night,

whoa oh just wanna hear you say goodnight,

die happily to hear it with you by my side,

you and i every night for eternity,

would really like to see,

cuz things just don't feel same,

I miss when I'd hear you say...

\\\[Chorus\\\]

Whoaa ohh

Never quite felt this way before

whoa oh, whoa oh

Never wanna let this feeling go

Whoa oh darling

first time I laid eyes

upon your sweet gaze

precious brown eyed girl

like no other in the world

voice with that sound

melody of an angel

cute little smile I can't deny

whoa oh am I fucking high

no control when the end is fucking nigh

did i straight up imprint

on her? I can't fucking lie

you and i feel tied until the end of time

Wait!! like jacob fucking black???... breaking dawn? is that cringe af?... am I on crack?

fuck, my back!!

yeah, fuck it!! I meant it

sincerely your's

whoa oh

Who cares? even if I could take this deeply ingrained attachment back? nana nana never in million years, no matter, how much, i try, or how it fucking hurts me inside

there's no erasing these primal ties

Whoa oh whoa oh oh...oh...oh

If this is healing? I don't even fucking knowwhoawhoa? but i'll say "whoa oh"

my love, my beloved, cheers to the sweet antebellum, the calm before the storm, cuz I feel there's another war about to rage inside

Whoa oh

one last time, in case i end it all tonight, I miss hearing you say goodnight...

A little rough draft of a autobiographical song/confessional diary poem i wrote after having a dream of the sound of it. Its kinda sad & dark af, but funny as well lol

\\\[Verse 1\\\]

Whoa oh, feels like, this world's, ending, but in reality its all mine, all in my fucked up head!!! these past 9 months have really fucked me thin!!

My passion's fire, buring thru this town/summer weekly, imagining all the one's i hate, are now all dead, this dead burned hollowed out heart, now am i really dead?

numb as fuck, drain the pressure away from this feeling.

a liter of vodka, a crude blade kiss my wrist to drain this feeling, I'm bleeding weak for you every night,

whoa oh just wanna hear you say goodnight,

die happily to hear it with you by my side,

you and i every night for eternity,

would really like to see,

cuz things just don't feel same,

I miss when I'd hear you say...

\\\[Chorus\\\]

Whoaa ohh

Never quite felt this way before

whoa oh, whoa oh

Never wanna let this feeling go

Whoa oh darling

first time I laid eyes

upon your sweet gaze

precious brown eyed girl

like no other in the world

voice with that sound

melody of an angel

cute little smile I can't deny

whoa oh am I fucking high

no control when the end is fucking nigh

did i straight up imprint

on her? I can't fucking lie

you and i feel tied until the end of time

Wait!! like jacob fucking black???... breaking dawn? is that cringe af?... am I on crack?

fuck, my back!!

yeah, fuck it!! I meant it

sincerely your's

whoa oh

Who cares? even if I could take this deeply ingrained attachment back? nana nana never in million years, no matter, how much, i try, or how it fucking hurts me inside

there's no erasing these primal ties

Whoa oh whoa oh oh...oh...oh

If this is healing? I don't even fucking knowwhoawhoa? but i'll say "whoa oh"

my love, my beloved, cheers to the sweet antebellum, the calm before the storm, cuz I feel there's another war about to rage inside

Whoa oh

one last time, in case i end it all tonight, I miss hearing you say goodnight...

A little rough draft of a autobiographical song/diary poem i wrote after having a dream of the sound of it. Its kinda sad & dark af, but funny as well lol

\[Verse 1\]

Whoa oh, feels like, this world's, ending, but in reality its all mine, all in my fucked up head!!! these past 9 months have really fucked me thin!!

My passion's fire, buring thru this town/summer weekly, imagining all the one's i hate, are now all dead, this dead burned hollowed out heart, now am i really dead?

numb as fuck, drain the pressure away from this feeling.

a liter of vodka, a crude blade kiss my wrist to drain this feeling, I'm bleeding weak for you every night,

whoa oh just wanna hear you say goodnight,

die happily to hear it with you by my side,

you and i every night for eternity,

would really like to see,

cuz things just don't feel same,

I miss when I'd hear you say...

\[Chorus\]

Whoaa ohh

Never quite felt this way before

whoa oh, whoa oh

Never wanna let this feeling go

Whoa oh darling

first time I laid eyes

upon your sweet gaze

precious brown eyed girl

like no other in the world

voice with that sound

melody of an angel

cute little smile I can't deny

whoa oh am I fucking high

no control when the end is fucking nigh

did i straight up imprint

on her? I can't fucking lie

you and i feel tied until the end of time

Wait!! like jacob fucking black???... breaking dawn? is that cringe af?... am I on crack?

fuck, my back!!

yeah, fuck it!! I meant it

sincerely your's

whoa oh

Who cares? even if I could take this deeply ingrained attachment back? nana nana never in million years, no matter, how much, i try, or how it fucking hurts me inside

there's no erasing these primal ties

Whoa oh whoa oh oh...oh...oh

If this is healing? I don't even fucking knowwhoawhoa? but i'll say "whoa oh"

my love, my beloved, cheers to the sweet antebellum, the calm before the storm, cuz I feel there's another war about to rage inside

Whoa oh

one last time, in case i end it all tonight, I miss hearing you say goodnight...