r/LyricWriters

I love music, and I'm so does everyone here. My favorite thing to so with music is to write my own stuff. Recently, I've started writing lyrics. Before that, it's just been stuff on my guitar. But I've noticed a problem with my lyrics. They don't shine the way I want them to. What I mean by this, is that they're just normal songs. You can look up a topic, and find a million songs that are almost identical. Now don't get me wrong, most of the songs are personal to that person, making them shine in their own way. But when you think about it, there are only a handful if songs that can really hit you. The lyrics convey the exact emotion you're feeling in that moment. ​but the problem with my lyrics is that they're not like that. I don't expect each and every single one of my songs to be a masterpiece that can hit top charts, but the ones that turn out decent are like thousands of other songs, the emotion is there, but it's still missing something. It's really hard to explain what I'm talking about, but given how many musicians are reading this, you've got to know what I mean, right? So here's my question: how do i make my lyrics shine and convey that deep emotion few songs manage to do?

Zel, i got some imprisondfood

trapped in his own delusional ego you gotta save dude

Tried to do the regurgitating shit levitating status dumb bit

Mangled by a Charlagmane by sentence i had to add the cadence cuz u know infini rude kid

lets just say he's in a bit of a pickle couldnt handle the cool so just deleted deserted desperately embarassed i guess

i aint measurin no mass

asking for no ass or assholes pumped up chad

this is me owning the banishment and aknowledging needed development

sadly this time its serious your effort and sorted guts are in critical need of involvement

Tron with the frazzled hair

did you wanna cook up mean ass turd flair?

Au Spiritual Infinibad delusional circus of pompous been spared

they be runnin like the ronin 47 chickenshit theatrical glory of stealth

not for u not for weak but weakest of them all inkless squid spoiled

rogue brittany chivalry my anomaly gifted humility spoiled rancid toy

once you start a notion
have an opinion about a motion
gotta participate in good faith not audition
this aint life or practice this about having proper communication

fuckin piss poor silence

buncha aces i thought once lay wasted with resent and regret in aligning cautious

i dont ever go back to fetch a loose end

i am here for the same reason u gave a shot first so could grock loose and listen

but you dont lose do ya

grocked came and had ur back whicthu yea?

wanna show me what type of 'worth ur time' violence warrant your nice to greet fuck

littlest fucks bittersweet my beverage of leverage your shitty cant cover will you free infiniBOO stuck?

The Theme of the Dream is to Free the word of Clean
Not a Single MC come at me with liberated views of team
(T)ogehther (E)veryone (A)chieves (M)ore.

bunch of sissy suss fucks more selfish and girlish than soupy soap mumbling singing faggets you fucking know who, no?

sigh...
its each and every one of sackless cunts at least Zel dont Sing poor

u/ZeltronXII

bad leg

sack shitty seg

wack as fuck why i spit so eloquently you might weigh

its def not for ur fucktard or daddy family atrocity mate

think hard for a second

that skull too dumb for the optionable second

what the fuck we injected color by color all every weekend

how many patiences did i penman before i honested shiniest moment?

u/True-Lie6456

Times up

Termination ironized by jeer

no mechanics no liquids lets governor more swart the lesser jewer

have you seen the range by hiding trojan

damage i can cause just by sipping on ur fear

you have not begun your worded journey u fetus litmus

i have yet to seen such impaired little ballooning ego swollen circus

Apprehensiv and True Lies did it too

i dont blame you fr even valerix feared the hue and chose fool

cuz its jungle apex survival brother

you just littler than bottom tier algae found in brothels

Cuz organs die young when you foreginer

all your systems wired sour at least you grovel

shamed at the name cant face the magic gavel

paraded so hard lost your heart brain and soul together

your ugly homeless soundstage completely depleted by the message

i dont utter stammer and try to hammer young un my deliverance clearance

Who is left is never the question

I have no opponents to match the aggression

wherewolf where unneccessary where og crew except delusional brittany

I applaud you for cowardice but simulatneously you are epitomizing mundanity

Wheres the pity
Wheres that knowledgeable query of whats up sir whats the problem sickly
I can see ur degenerate without the faintest
There are no pillars of perception or convictions even if u commit to rainbowed dickless righteous to try remain i aint faked mess

u a mess

bested out of misplaced deceit and ingrown mutilated stems

strength is not a length for you its inner deeper simulated stench

situated even steeper now you was once benched now just ill mannered wench

the sooner you answer this simple capitulation the greater magnitude of revelation you shall comprehend

u/infinitude_