Give it me straight trying a new style of writing it was fun.

Tropical fish girls in bikini suits swim to sand castles water proof

Crowded room safeplace when im in my head passing through can't cause me harm eyes are closed padded room

jeans baggy dont fit my waistline hourglass figure you can tell the time

Night lights if your brave enough to see monster eyes

Innocent fresh to life gold teeth i like to smile right ghost tracked by satellites every star manufactured lights

Search bar screen light big waves deep dive

Gps guiding light heart means im a good guy

silver tongue worth more than your life charisma can stop time

Shades inside reality in dimmed lights

Ice cubes steel tomb dont resurrect light the candle transcend to another level watching with my many eyes

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u/fleshy_mess — 9 days ago

Cloud rap producers looking to work closely together?

(One of my songs i wrote today as an example of my writing)

Tropical fish girls in bikini suits swim to sand castles water proof

Crowded room safeplace when im in my head passing through can't cause me harm eyes are closed padded room

jeans baggy dont fit my waistline hourglass figure you can tell the time

Think to hard like its 9 to 5 no paycheck just obsessed thoughts of monsters coming out no night light

Innocent living so limitless saving time ghost tracked by satellites every star manufacturered lights

Search bar screen light big waves deep dive

Gps guiding light heart means im a good guy

silver tongue worth more than your life charisma can stop time

Shades inside reality in dimmed lights

Ice cubes steel tomb dont resurrect did my time light the candle i go outside of time next plane with my many eyes

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u/fleshy_mess — 9 days ago

I think im getting better at writing everyday, thoughts?

Tropical fish girls in bikini suits swim to sand castles water proof

Crowded room safeplace when im in my head passing through can't cause me harm eyes are closed padded room

jeans baggy dont fit my waistline hourglass figure you can tell the time

Think to hard like its 9 to 5 no paycheck just obsessed thoughts of monsters coming out no night light

Innocent I keep the piggy bank up high walking straight dont trip might drop a dime

Search bar screen light big waves deep dive

Gps guiding light heart means im good guy

silver tongue worth more than your life charisma can stop time

Shades inside reality in dimmed lights

Ice cubes steel tomb dont resurrect did my time light the candle i go outside of time next plane with my many eyes

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u/fleshy_mess — 10 days ago

Is my flow good ? (Rap)

[Verse 1]

Role models cant solve your problems be yourself remember that girl in your locket

in my pocket random pills just pick my pocket

If there's shade that's where we're stopping heat will melt the ice we rockin

[Chrous ]

Yea I'm dizzy what's the problem

I've gotta image I want it painted and mounted

they wearing wires I keep it cool tall tales can't get much higher

Flip a coin if it's heads they rigged and stopped it

[Verse 2]

If there's a beat my head is boppin

Family heirlooms are the drugs that stopped em

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u/fleshy_mess — 19 days ago

Wrote in the rain, freestyle

[Chrous]

Rain rain my fit drips without a stain

Am I hunter or am I prey

number one its not the medal its the stage I need the height to see the caution tape

error 404 can't go that way

[Verse 1]

Arrows hit 360 spin show the birds how fly I did the sin

Steel toe boots to cut my limbs

[Outro]

No disguise ill mime a statue and collect some pay

water fountain my wish is safe

where's the stakes the nights so clean it fades away

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u/fleshy_mess — 20 days ago
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Cloud rap song made in a couple weeks, thoughts ?

[Verse 1]

Lost myself in the labels designer labels

I can beat an angel the static it waivers there goes the rainbow

[Verse 2]

Cards face up a family of love

Prince drinking from the cup on the throne I tell the people what's up

guards pile up salute and do my bidding wishing and believing my sword isn't just for scheming

[Verse 3]

Smiling but its upside down balloons i pass around voice so loud

[Chorus]

I don't pray to demons no reason to turn evil halo made of steel yknow

[Outro]

I'm lucky and thankful I outrank the soldiers following orders

fuck eve for one night then come out in the daylight

Nodding off im praying my bible so faithful the hospital daydream

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u/fleshy_mess — 20 days ago

Song I wrote in an hour, thoughts ? [Lyrics]

[Verse 1]

Four wheel drive its a smooth ride

That's right beautiful light in my line of sight

Something looks at me from up high

I've been good no lightning strikes

[Verse 2]

The idols blind put my hands on their eyes

Surprise I survived many times

That's right blade knife sword it all cuts fine

All my friends still alive empty graves and empty minds

No cuffs for the crime pull strings for the hive

[Outro]

Shake hands with the mind treat yourself right

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u/fleshy_mess — 28 days ago
▲ 5 r/Poems

For you and me

I won't forget a memory between you and I

I hit replay a hundred times

Echos are the angels repeating what i thought

Leaning on the wall while I listen to you talk

Fidget with the watch set alarms to clear the fog

If i can read the stars maybe youll come along

Chop the trees for the guillotine breathing is the enemy

I jump into the next life

soul leaking I put myself into everything

Lending whats left always the best

I don't need anything ill climb out of my bed

Bleed out with my best friend

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u/fleshy_mess — 1 month ago

Song I wrote tonight, thoughts ? [Lyrics]

[Verse 1]

Rotted rooted get the gluestick

White tee and bruises

Keep the story straight and fluent

I know the truth throwing deuces

I've got to do it the crown is moving

[Verse 2]

In your car drinking and smoking your text lights where im going

Catch my breath -- cant catch if theirs no sun

Camouflaged in the open haunting the soldiers

My unicorns magic my humans not static forever changing

[Outro]

Standing highly i think of you nightly

Keep your tears beside me I dont watch when your dieing

6 hands reach the high beams

friends that fight me matching wounds close it no fluids

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u/fleshy_mess — 1 month ago

Cloud rap producer? [Lyrics]

[Verse 1]

what I don't want you to see -- my teeth all rotted but my face happy

Stitch us together -- light as a feather

Blood letter -- I let it fall and catch it -- i won't let it dirty our name

See the hills from a height -- your eyes watch the time

Im focused and sniffing lotus -- 9 flowers bloom in focus out of focus crown no weight that om holding

[Verse 2]

Im thinking that you choose this -- us growing closer -- bandages and they moldy kept the blood flowing

Catch my breath like a home run -- cant catch if theirs no sun

Camouflaged in the open -- im not hidden bitch im glowing

I just want you to know me -- a part of your story

Standing 5 stories on my money I'm soaring

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u/fleshy_mess — 1 month ago

Need a producer for cloud rap ! My lyrics below !

what I don't want you to see -- my teeth all rotted but my face happy

Im a part of you -- your a part of me

Stitch us together -- light as a feather

We're forever tethered then severed

Blood letter -- I let it fall and catch it -- i won't let it dirty our name

See the hills from a height -- your eyes watch the time

Im focused and sniffing lotus -- reminds me that we're stuck in the moment

Hold it then throw it -- don't let them know it -- im thinking that you choose this -- us growing slowly

Catch my breath like a home run -- cant catch if theirs no sun

Camouflaged in the open -- i don't care where im going

I just want you to know me -- a part of your story

To get to glory -- its a gorey story -- wait for you at the otherside -- I'm feeling the grime -- hands covered with the sin of the night

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u/fleshy_mess — 1 month ago
▲ 5 r/Poems

It's not hard to see

what I don't want you to see -- my teeth all rotted but my face happy

Im a part of you -- your a part of me

Stitch us together -- light as a feather

We're forever tethered then severed

Blood letter -- I let it fall and catch it -- i won't let it dirty our name

See the hills from a height -- your eyes watch the time

Im focused and sniffing lotus -- reminds me that we're stuck in the moment

Hold it then throw it -- don't let them know it -- im thinking that you choose this -- us growing slowly

Catch my breath like a home run -- cant catch if theirs no sun

Camouflaged in the open -- i don't care where im going

I just want you to know me -- a part of your story

To get to glory -- its a gorey story -- wait for you at the otherside -- I'm feeling the grime -- hands covered with the sin of the night

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u/fleshy_mess — 1 month ago
▲ 3 r/Poems

What you need

It grows the words in your throat -- my eyes keep seeing them float

Ill burn what I wrote -- my tears I was drinking never wasting the feeling

You fall through my hands i took a picture as proof -- the image faded into the dirt of the land

you put blood in my brain -- i want you to talk to the solitude -- make a friend with what watches you

The roots go through the hardest of bones

i dident think I could die -- skipping through time

My tears were dry -- my hands on the line -- grinning remembering what I couldent do right

i look over my shoulder -- behind me your nowhere -- so I stay frozen -- stuck in a perfect moment

You reflect in my mind -- something I liked you were always standing in the corner of my eye

Show my teeth when I smile -- if they leave theyll come back in style

I sneak past my friends -- and appear once again -- i let my defenses rot to your hand

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u/fleshy_mess — 2 months ago

Fleshymessy soundcloud (Looking 4 producer?)

Song=

Plague doctor roaming cursed streets carriage withered horse teeth gold plated blood ina puddle double agent im trouble blood let them they let me heaven sent who they sending theres someone here looking in to me in the mirror trying to see crucifix me super clean kill myself come back again im obviously veteran

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u/fleshy_mess — 2 months ago
▲ 2 r/Poems

Friends in high places

Friends in high places

Empty pockets mean hands are shaking

I went crazy dancing 666 satan

taking pics make a wish the kids are very sick

In your words I see a diss just tell me im the shit

Lick the lollipop innocent I cant be wrong

Crushed love dove delivered the message crush love it went to my head

we're here to joke and signal guards tie my shoes with double knots

your the one in my head keeping me strong puppet strings held by god

The other side the ticking clock waiting for you i always was

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u/fleshy_mess — 3 months ago

Thoughts on my cloud rap writing? [Lyrics]

[Verse 1]

Friends in high places

Empty pockets mean hands are shaking

I went crazy dancing 666 satan

taking pics make a wish the kids are very sick

In your words I see a diss just tell me im the shit

[Verse 2]

Lick the lollipop innocent I cant be wrong

Crushed love dove delivered the message crush love it went to my head

we're here to joke and signal guards tie my shoes with double knots

your the one in my head keeping me strong puppet strings held by god

The other side the ticking clock waiting for you i always was

[Chorus]

Swear on what I love so I I raise my hand and put the middle finger up

Love the dove flying up

Flying up

[Outro]

Bye bye bye

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u/fleshy_mess — 3 months ago

Review my song ! I love writing whats in the back of my head (cloud rap)

Friends in high places

Empty pockets mean hands are shaking

I went crazy dancing 666 satan

taking pics make a wish the kids are very sick

In your words I see a diss just tell me im the shit

Lick the lollipop innocent I cant be wrong

Crushed love dove delivered the message crush love it went to my head

we're here to joke and signal guards tie my shoes with double knots

your the one in my head keeping me strong puppet strings held by god

The other side the ticking clock waiting for you i always was

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u/fleshy_mess — 3 months ago
▲ 1 r/Poems

Song i wrote about the ghosts in my arms

Friends in high places

Empty pockets mean hands are shaking

I went crazy dancing 666 satan

taking pics make a wish the kids are very sick

In your words I see a diss just tell me im the shit

Lick the lollipop innocent I cant be wrong

Crushed love dove delivered messages like arrows to your heart

we're here to joke and signal guards tie my shoes with double knots

your the one in my head keeping me strong puppet strings held by god

The other side the ticking clock waiting for you i always was

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u/fleshy_mess — 3 months ago

Write a beat for this song! (Im a good writer but can't make beats seeing what people think)

Friends in high places

Empty pockets mean hands are shaking

I went crazy dancing 666 satan

taking pics make a wish the kids are very sick

In your words I see a diss just tell me im the shit

Lick the lollipop innocent I cant be wrong

Crushed love dove delivered the message crush love it went to my head

we're here to joke and signal guards tie my shoes with double knots

your the one in my head keeping me strong puppet strings held by god

The other side the ticking clock waiting for you i always was

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u/fleshy_mess — 3 months ago