Open for collaborations

Here We Go Again

Verse 1

Too close, too far,

The feeling I still feel apart.

Only you could still be here with me,

With you I still feel deep within.

If I could make a choice,

I'd still choose you,

Right here, right now.

Chorus

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

And we'll last again.

Verse 2

Every moment, every dream,

You're the light that I still see.

Even when the nights grow cold,

Your love is the one I hold.

No matter where this road may lead,

You're still everything I need.

If tomorrow starts today,

I'll never walk away.

Bridge

If time could stop for just one night,

I'd keep you here until daylight.

No second thoughts, no looking back,

You're the only heart I have.

So if you're willing, stay with me,

Let's write the story we're meant to be.

[Final Chorus]

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

We'll make this last again.

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Too close to let you go,

Right here, right now.

Forever starts with you.

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u/le_elwo_n — 14 days ago

Feedback on this song...who ever wants me to write a song for them I'm clearly here for anything

Here We Go Again

Verse 1

Too close, too far,

The feeling I still feel apart.

Only you could still be here with me,

With you I still feel deep within.

If I could make a choice,

I'd still choose you,

Right here, right now.

Chorus

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

And we'll last again.

Verse 2

Every moment, every dream,

You're the light that I still see.

Even when the nights grow cold,

Your love is the one I hold.

No matter where this road may lead,

You're still everything I need.

If tomorrow starts today,

I'll never walk away.

Bridge

If time could stop for just one night,

I'd keep you here until daylight.

No second thoughts, no looking back,

You're the only heart I have.

So if you're willing, stay with me,

Let's write the story we're meant to be.

[Final Chorus]

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you hold my hand?

Here we go now, here we go now.

Would you still understand

How much I love you?

We'll make this last again

Oh, I fall in love again,

Here we go now, here we go now.

Too close to let you go

Right here, right now

Forever starts with you

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u/le_elwo_n — 14 days ago

Need feedback on this one

Lost In The Haze

Verse 1

Sitting alone in my room, playing music all day feeling doom

Not knowing what to do

Feeling stuck in this dark room, suffocated

Like I'm losing my bloom

Chorus

Will I find my way out?(Oh)

Break these chains

Let the light shout (shout(

Or will I stay in the haze?(Stay in this haze)

Lost in shadows,fading days(oh days)

Verse 2

Tried to chase the night away(night away)

But the city is empty,just a grey(oh grey)

Echoes of my heart beat sound (sound)

I'm searching for a way to turn it around(around)

Chorus

Will I find my way out?(Oh)

Break these chains

Let the light shout (shout(

Or will I stay in the haze?(Stay in this haze)

Lost in shadows,fading days(oh days)

Bridge

Maybe I'll hide from this mess(oh woah)

Find my voice,let me spirit confess(confess)

Or maybe I'll learn to let go(let go)

And find my way to a brand new glow(glow)

Chorus

Will I find my way out?(Oh)

Break these chains

Let the light shout (shout(

Or will I stay in the haze?(Stay in this haze)

Lost in shadows,fading days(oh days)

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Let me introduce myself properly

Hi my name is Lesedi Mohai but I'm well known as ELOWEN I'm an independent singer/songwriter from south Africa, I'm actually here to look for a collaboration bcz I don't just write songs I sing as well but I don't have produced songs but I do have social media accounts which you can click on the links in my profile I sing cover songs and I also sing my original songs as an Acapella bcz I'm not an instrumentalist and the genres I'm going for is emotive RnB, indie pop, soulful pop and dark pop.i would be glad if anyone is there to collaborate with me

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Let me introduce myself properly

Hi my name is Lesedi Mohai but I'm well known as ELOWEN I'm an independent singer/songwriter from south Africa, I'm actually here to look for a collaboration bcz I don't just write songs I sing as well but I don't have produced songs but I do have social media accounts which you can click on the links in my profile I sing cover songs and I also sing my original songs as an Acapella bcz I'm not an instrumentalist and the genres I'm going for is emotive RnB, indie pop, soulful pop and dark pop.i would be glad if anyone is there to collaborate with me

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Let me introduce myself properly

Hi my name is Lesedi Mohai but I'm well known as ELOWEN I'm an independent singer/songwriter from south Africa, I'm actually here to look for a collaboration bcz I don't just write songs I sing as well but I don't have produced songs but I do have social media accounts which you can click on the links in my profile I sing cover songs and I also sing my original songs as an Acapella bcz I'm not an instrumentalist and the genres I'm going for is emotive RnB, indie pop, soulful pop and dark pop.i would be glad if anyone is there to collaborate with me

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Just a song I've just written recently

My Heart Is That of an Eternal Rose

Verse 1

In a garden where the moonlight weeps (Ooh...)

I buried all the words I couldn't keep. (Mm...)

Ghosts of yesterday still call my name, (Still calling...)

But I bloom untouched by all the flames. (Yeah...)

Every petal holds a silent prayer, (A prayer...)

Every thorn remembers who wasn't there. (Who wasn't there...)

Pre-Chorus

If the sky forgets my light (Forgets my light...)

If the stars all disappear, (Disappear...)

I'll become my own sunrise, (I'll rise...)

Growing through the fear. (Ooh...)

Chorus

My heart is that of an eternal rose, (Eternal rose...)

Blooming where no one dares to go. (Oh-oh...)

Painted by the rain, kissed by the cold, (By the cold...)

More alive than I'll ever know. (I know...)

Even when the seasons steal my glow, (They can't take it...)

Love still runs beneath my soul. (My soul...)

My heart is that of an eternal rose... (Forever...)

Forever wild... forever whole. (Whoa... yeah...)

Verse 2

I have danced with lonely echoes, (Echoes...)

Held the silence in my hands. (In my hands...)

Turned my tears into a river, (Ooh...)

Watched it carve a better land. (A better land...)

I am not the girl who shattered, (No...)

I'm the flower that survived. (I'm alive...)

Bridge

The wind may scatter all my leaves, (Blow away...)

But it cannot touch my roots. (Never...)

Beauty isn't born from comfort, (No...)

It's born from telling the truth. (The truth...)

Final Chorus

My heart is that of an eternal rose, (Eternal... eternal...)

Crimson dreams beneath the snow. (Ooh...)

Every thorn protects a love (Protects a love...)

That refused to let me go. (Never let me go...)

When the world forgets my name, (Forgets my name...)

I'll still bloom just the same. (I'll bloom...)

My heart is that of an eternal rose... (An eternal rose...)

A soul no winter could ever tame. (No winter... no...)

Outro

If you find one lonely flower (One lonely flower...)

Standing where the darkness grows... (Where the darkness grows...)

You'll know you've found my heart... (You've found my heart...)

The eternal rose. (Ooh... eternal rose... yeah...)

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Just a song I've just written recently

My Heart Is That of an Eternal Rose

Verse 1

In a garden where the moonlight weeps (Ooh...)

I buried all the words I couldn't keep. (Mm...)

Ghosts of yesterday still call my name, (Still calling...)

But I bloom untouched by all the flames. (Yeah...)

Every petal holds a silent prayer, (A prayer...)

Every thorn remembers who wasn't there. (Who wasn't there...)

Pre-Chorus

If the sky forgets my light (Forgets my light...)

If the stars all disappear, (Disappear...)

I'll become my own sunrise, (I'll rise...)

Growing through the fear. (Ooh...)

Chorus

My heart is that of an eternal rose, (Eternal rose...)

Blooming where no one dares to go. (Oh-oh...)

Painted by the rain, kissed by the cold, (By the cold...)

More alive than I'll ever know. (I know...)

Even when the seasons steal my glow, (They can't take it...)

Love still runs beneath my soul. (My soul...)

My heart is that of an eternal rose... (Forever...)

Forever wild... forever whole. (Whoa... yeah...)

Verse 2

I have danced with lonely echoes, (Echoes...)

Held the silence in my hands. (In my hands...)

Turned my tears into a river, (Ooh...)

Watched it carve a better land. (A better land...)

I am not the girl who shattered, (No...)

I'm the flower that survived. (I'm alive...)

Bridge

The wind may scatter all my leaves, (Blow away...)

But it cannot touch my roots. (Never...)

Beauty isn't born from comfort, (No...)

It's born from telling the truth. (The truth...)

Final Chorus

My heart is that of an eternal rose, (Eternal... eternal...)

Crimson dreams beneath the snow. (Ooh...)

Every thorn protects a love (Protects a love...)

That refused to let me go. (Never let me go...)

When the world forgets my name, (Forgets my name...)

I'll still bloom just the same. (I'll bloom...)

My heart is that of an eternal rose... (An eternal rose...)

A soul no winter could ever tame. (No winter... no...)

Outro

If you find one lonely flower (One lonely flower...)

Standing where the darkness grows... (Where the darkness grows...)

You'll know you've found my heart... (You've found my heart...)

The eternal rose. (Ooh... eternal rose... yeah...)

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u/le_elwo_n — 16 days ago

Another original song I've written. I'd love hear what emotions and imagery it gives you

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Delayed Replies

VERSE 1

I see your name light up my screen

then it fades like it don’t mean a thing

you used to answer instantly

now I wait like it’s hurting me

every seen feels like distance

silence louder than before

I don’t know when you changed on me

but I feel it more and more

PRE-CHORUS

maybe I’m thinking too deep

or maybe you’re slipping from me

I type and erase what I feel

cause I don’t know what is real

CHORUS

it’s the delayed replies(delayed replies x2)

that keep me up at night

You used to call me mine (oh oh)

Now you just pass the time

I watch those three dots lie (dots lie)

Then disappear from sight (sight)

Tell me if I'm not right (I'm not right)

Or just a late reply(reply)

VERSE 2

now I check my phone too much(oh)

like it might bring you back(back together)

every message left on read(read)

feels like something I lack(mm yeah)

I act like I’m okay outside

but it hits when I’m alone(all by myself,yeah)

cause your silence feels like you

don’t even call my phone(ohh yeah)

PRE-CHORUS 2

maybe I should let it go(let it go)

but I keep holding on(mm)

to the version of you

that I know is gone(gone yeah)

FINAL CHORUS

it’s the delayed replies(delayed replies x2)

That keep me up at night(night yeah)

You used to call me mine(can you call yours)

Now you just pass the time(time)

I watch those three dots lie (lie oh)

Then disappear from sight

Tell me if I'm not right (oh woah)

Or just a late reply(reply)

OUTRO

mmh…

delayed replies…

why you doing this…

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u/le_elwo_n — 20 days ago

Another original song I've written. I'd love hear what emotions and imagery it gives you

Delayed Replies

VERSE 1

I see your name light up my screen

then it fades like it don’t mean a thing

you used to answer instantly

now I wait like it’s hurting me

every seen feels like distance

silence louder than before

I don’t know when you changed on me

but I feel it more and more

PRE-CHORUS

maybe I’m thinking too deep

or maybe you’re slipping from me

I type and erase what I feel

cause I don’t know what is real

CHORUS

it’s the delayed replies(delayed replies x2)

that keep me up at night

You used to call me mine (oh oh)

Now you just pass the time

I watch those three dots lie (dots lie)

Then disappear from sight (sight)

Tell me if I'm not right (I'm not right)

Or just a late reply(reply)

VERSE 2

now I check my phone too much(oh)

like it might bring you back(back together)

every message left on read(read)

feels like something I lack(mm yeah)

I act like I’m okay outside

but it hits when I’m alone(all by myself,yeah)

cause your silence feels like you

don’t even call my phone(ohh yeah)

PRE-CHORUS 2

maybe I should let it go(let it go)

but I keep holding on(mm)

to the version of you

that I know is gone(gone yeah)

FINAL CHORUS

it’s the delayed replies(delayed replies x2)

That keep me up at night(night yeah)

You used to call me mine(can you call yours)

Now you just pass the time(time)

I watch those three dots lie (lie oh)

Then disappear from sight

Tell me if I'm not right (oh woah)

Or just a late reply(reply)

OUTRO

mmh…

delayed replies…

why you doing this…

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u/le_elwo_n — 20 days ago

Hi everyone, I’m Elowen, an independent singer-songwriter from South Africa. 🎶 I’m passionate about creating emotional music that tells stories. My style is a mix of emotive R&B, indie pop, soulful pop, and dark pop. I love writing songs about love, heartbreak and self-discovery

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u/le_elwo_n — 21 days ago
▲ 4 r/LyricalWriting+2 crossposts

Original song

Lonely Heart

Verse 1

Guess we're done,it's over now

We were fire,but flame died out

I saw the truth, it's clear to me

Wish I didn't love you,but I did, obviously

Pre-Chorus

I'm a lonely heart, beating slow

Nobody is here to love me now

Lost in the night with no place to go

Left with shadows that's all I know

Chorus

My heart is hurtingx3

Seeing you move on it cuts deep

I feel so lonelyx3

Like I'm all by myself,it's hard to breathe

Maybe someday I'll let go

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u/le_elwo_n — 21 days ago