u/Sea_Contribution3455

Just to clarify, this villain is not an eldritch entity masquerading as Sonic or one of his friends.

But aspects of his character are heavily inspired by a couple of Sonic creepypasta characters.

I am still having trouble completely fleshing him out, but I have found that people asking me questions about things I am working on help me improve on them.

So, do we have any takers?

What would you like to know about this mysterious monster?

To give a bit of context, my AU diverges from canon very early on into the Clone Wars- as in, right after the Battle of Christophsis. Anakin responds much more negatively to being tasked with Rotta's son, so Obi-Wan and Yoda decide it would be best to give Anakin time to cool off, and discuss this assignment the next morning. That night, Qui-Gon's spirit tries to reach out to Anakin again, and this time is successful, allowing him to give Anakin some much-needed counseling and advice. As a result, Anakin is able to give Obi-Wan and Yoda a calmer and more reasonable argument for why he does not want to do this assignment, and as such, he stays behind on Christophsis while Obi-Wan heads off to rescue Rotta. However, this seemingly small deviation from canon, as the title of my post may suggest, ends up having a huge impact on how the events of the Clone Wars and beyond unfold.

I have a basic idea of what I want to do with this story, but the key details are proving to be a bit difficult to set in stone, especially since there are several ways I could handle them that all have their own pros and cons. I was hoping you guys might be able to help me with that. I have three big components that are giving me the most trouble, which are the following:

1. Before he can become the master of his own Jedi Order, Anakin needs his own Jedi Temple. Fortunately, there are plenty of old temples from the days of the Old/High Republic for him to stumble across, then keep finding reasons to go back and explore, as though they call to him. So far, I have three locations that I all think would be solid candidates- Lothal, Tanalorre, and Tython.
2. Because Anakin's interpretation of the Jedi Code allows for more personal freedoms, several of the other Jedi find that appealing, and eventually leave Coruscant to join his own. However, I am having trouble determining who exactly those Jedi would be.
3. Palpatine has spent the last decade grooming Anakin to one day fall to the Dark Side and become his apprentice, and now that plan turns out to have been in vain. But Darth Sidious is a very cunning man, so this is only a setback for him. But if Anakin is no longer going to become Darth Vader, Palpatine needs a new apprentice.

What do you guys think? Is there any advice you guys can offer me about this? I would love to hear your thoughts- and if you need more information about something before you can give input, I am happy to provide that within reason. After all, I do not want to spoil the entire story in advance.

To give a bit of context, my AU diverges from canon very early on into the Clone Wars- as in, right after the Battle of Christophsis. Anakin responds much more negatively to being tasked with Rotta's son, so Obi-Wan and Yoda decide it would be best to give Anakin time to cool off, and discuss this assignment the next morning. That night, Qui-Gon's spirit tries to reach out to Anakin again, and this time is successful, allowing him to give Anakin some much-needed counseling and advice. As a result, Anakin is able to give Obi-Wan and Yoda a calmer and more reasonable argument for why he does not want to do this assignment, and as such, he stays behind on Christophsis while Obi-Wan heads off to rescue Rotta. However, this seemingly small deviation from canon, as the title of my post may suggest, ends up having a huge impact on how the events of the Clone Wars and beyond unfold.

I have a basic idea of what I want to do with this story, but the key details are proving to be a bit difficult to set in stone, especially since there are several ways I could handle them that all have their own pros and cons. I was hoping you guys might be able to help me with that. I have three big components that are giving me the most trouble, which are the following:

1. Before he can become the master of his own Jedi Order, Anakin needs his own Jedi Temple. Fortunately, there are plenty of old temples from the days of the Old/High Republic for him to stumble across, then keep finding reasons to go back and explore, as though they call to him. So far, I have three locations that I all think would be solid candidates- Lothal, Tanalorre, and Tython.

2. Because Anakin's interpretation of the Jedi Code allows for more personal freedoms, several of the other Jedi find that appealing, and eventually leave Coruscant to join his own. However, I am having trouble determining who exactly those Jedi would be.

3. Palpatine has spent the last decade grooming Anakin to one day fall to the Dark Side and become his apprentice, and now that plan turns out to have been in vain. But Darth Sidious is a very cunning man, so this is only a setback for him. But if Anakin is no longer going to become Darth Vader, Palpatine needs a new apprentice.

What do you guys think? Is there any advice you guys can offer me about this? I would love to hear your thoughts- and if you need more information about something before you can give input, I am happy to provide that within reason. After all, I do not want to spoil the entire story in advance.