u/SkinnyBaconYT

i little while ago i asked if i should change what project i was working on because it would take way to long to animate and would work better as a live action series so instead i pivoted it to the comic medium while i work on other shows for the foreseeable future. so far I've only done one part of the first episodes script it took me a bit and since I'm posting one webtoon i figured it would be fine to post my progress the stuff covered is the first fight seen i do think the pacing near the end is not the best but looking for any feedback hears the link to the ep https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/dusk/list?title_no=1175646

Need feedback on my charicter designs the first guy is the mc Dusk he's broke so he can't afford an extravagant costume he whers tazer gloves that turn on when the metal on his middle and index finger connects with the metal on his thumbs completing a circuit. The second one is dawn a botanist and chemists he has fire ability but his body is not adapted to them so mostly he uses bio weapons he decided to use his powers to harm big corporations after his research to cure his mothers cancer was stolen and destroyed as its more profitable to treat it than to cure it. The third is named voltage he comes from a lineage of heros but his father gave away all ther money to charity causing them to go broke so he killed him and took his place and is set on remaking his fortune. The last one is Brad he's like superman but short becus he floats everywhere and dusent use his leg muscles.

My show it about the mc (the blue guy) returning home after beating the villan (the orange guy). The mc was raised by his master to do one thing and one thing only defeat the villan his master spent his youth trying to do the same but failed so for the rest of his life he forged the mc into the ultimate warrior beating the villan was his purpose but after returning home the mc feels empty he achieved what was saposed to be his life's work yet he feels nothing the show kicks off then and we see him trying to find out who he really is and not who he was made to be while he trys to understand purpose. During the big battle befor the pilot the villans horn wich is what he uses to draw in mana like a lightning rod is damaged the image is of befor wich is why its in tact, his horn being damaged means he can only use week spells and is nower near the strength of his former self he acts as a minor nuisance speaking to drag the mc back into a fight to "reclaim his honor" I also want him to go on a jorny sort of i want him to realize why he acts the way he dus and I want him to want to fix things but not to get into anyone's good grace's (he will not be forgivin by most) but to try and atone for his misdeeds. Show is only in beginning stages writing pilot and working on more charicters

This is my mc i don't have a name for him yet

i was story boarding and i actually really like this one lust as a peace of art

these are 2 characters i had ideas or but no pixel art like with the other 3 but i did have mushrooms picked out for them which made it easer meaning future designs will take much longer (last 3 designs https://www.reddit.com/r/MangakaStudio/comments/1uiax6s/shroomnobi\_character\_designs/)

working on a manga based on a video game i had started to make but never finished so i translated the characters i had designed in pixel art to regular art the characters are samurai and the mc is a former ninja hens mushroom + shinobi = shroomnobi

working on a story where all my characters are mushroom samurai and the book is called shroomnobi i wanted the hands and feet to stand out as most of the body will be covered up any feedback helps

Working on coloring with screen tones and shading this is my mc after a fight

the first image is the main character who grew up in the slightly higher Teck Trailor park. the second image is of a side character that grew up in the upper class there city is higher Teck but more like Astro boy 2009 with an emphasis on air based Teck the Oni mask us worn by the uppercases when going in the lower classes due to the lower air quality. the 3rd is another from the lower class but one that grew up in the closest city to the high-class its a more cyber punk type city with the neon lights this is where the main story takes place.