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He's an ill - fitted and dim - witted

numb nuts

Mind splitted like Dmx and Damiun

Barely stunted like Twice, Academia

But he's never limited unlike us,

The regular peepers

His thoughts flit like uh,

dyslexia

And he's steel erected like

Tryin' to find a measure

Feelin' a little viscious,

pretentious

He's ridiculous like Ferb n' Phineas

linear to bearin' fear with rever-

ence, and still care bout frens

that turn their backs in the end

It's just an appearence,

the realness isn't real,

deep down, he's much more complex

He's like spidey against the phoenix

He can flip bondings like

bleachin' a reek n'

Make it look eligible, just a normal

ripple on the stream

It's not ripple, but rippable

Soil in front of a reaper

The way he is, it's just a regulator

To fool us into our misdemeanor

Sets the stricture and we fool enough not to picture

The caricature, seemingly a zebra

And yes, I'm talkin 'bout religion

where you guys dont understand please do ask as i wrote every line with a meaning behind it....

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 hours ago

[lyrics] feedback needed

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Shakespeare be movin' in his grave

if he see me loadin'

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

Feedback needed

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Shakespeare be movin' in his grave

if he see me loadin'

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

[lyrics] please give feedback guys

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Shakespeare be movin' in his grave

if he see me loadin'

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

[lyrics] stream of thoughts

verse:

Ayo, look

Metally fucked,

Stuck in a cage,

raged and doped up

Holdin a 12 gauge, ready to shoot myself in the face

Life is a goddamn race 'til doomsday

My ways are laced up like strays undazed

Metally ill being real, aint there time no games

Being gay is better than supressing your feelings (fillings) like scared

I'm detached, dont know what to do maybe dispatch,

Embar-

rassed, when I see my idols:

Lets say Wayne, jay, em

So triumphant

Its like I see them through my ray ban

Guess I need to get hit by a ram in the head

Get laid and think bout myself

Come to senses

I am late

chorus (x3):

This is my stream of thoughts,

I look obnoxious,

believe or not

I'm not even conscious

My conscience stops

At the point when I start to

make shit up

verse:

Thoughts become exorbitant

As I grow up,

My skill grows but I'm stopped within

I pick up the pen and locked in it

What happened to the "me" who was exuberant,

Jubilant, took everything as a game and went through with it

Now its like I'm caged, these chains of restraints are laced all the way to my brain

Is that you Vecna, are these not chains

It's all fuckin blood rain (reign)

Wait.. where I'm goin' with this,

Need to be e-lucid-ate(d), (a-lucid-ate)

the poisoned apple is not what I meant

Detectin' the poison tree, I been fooled once maybe twice

And even fooled all my life, Tomfoolery type

Guess mice killin' is I can do, maybe prototype,

call me merciless

But I'm fuckin' loose

mind not ripe as before, i didnt want the hype

The golden goose didnt lay the golden egg

Cuz it was painted with fucking gold paint

Golden than salmon cooked in stainless pans

Caught fresh up the stream in yo' mind,

Lookin' like a white line,

Caramelised but not onions, its what you define

Yeah this my stream of thoughts,

none to be left behind

I'm talkin' way more than comics, its all bout

life....

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

untitled

verse:

Ayo, look

Metally fucked,

Stuck in a cage,

raged and doped up

Holdin a 12 gauge, ready to shoot myself in the face

Life is a goddamn race 'til doomsday

My ways are laced up like strays undazed

Metally ill being real, aint there time no games

Being gay is better than supressing your feelings (fillings) like scared

I'm detached, dont know what to do maybe dispatch,

Embar-

rassed, when I see my idols:

Lets say Wayne, jay, em

So triumphant

Its like I see them through my ray ban

Guess I need to get hit by a ram in the head

Get laid and think bout myself

Come to senses

I am late

chorus (x3):

This is my stream of thoughts,

I look obnoxious,

believe or not

I'm not even conscious

My conscience stops

At the point when I start to

make shit up

verse:

Thoughts become exorbitant

As I grow up,

My skill grows but I'm stopped within

I pick up the pen and locked in it

What happened to the "me" who was exuberant,

Jubilant, took everything as a game and went through with it

Now its like I'm caged, these chains of restraints are laced all the way to my brain

Is that you Vecna, are these not chains

It's all fuckin blood rain (reign)

Wait.. where I'm goin' with this,

Need to be e-lucid-ate(d), (a-lucid-ate)

the poisoned apple is not what I meant

Detectin' the poison tree, I been fooled once maybe twice

And even fooled all my life, Tomfoolery type

Guess mice killin' is I can do, maybe prototype,

call me merciless

But I'm fuckin' loose

mind not ripe as before, i didnt want the hype

The golden goose didnt lay the golden egg

Cuz it was painted with fucking gold paint

Golden than salmon cooked in stainless pans

Caught fresh up the stream in yo' mind,

Lookin' like a white line,

Caramelised but not onions, its what you define

Yeah this my stream of thoughts,

none to be left behind

I'm talkin' way more than comics, its all bout

life....

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

[lyrics] untitled

verse:

Ayo, look

Metally fucked,

Stuck in a cage,

raged and doped up

Holdin a 12 gauge, ready to shoot myself in the face

Life is a goddamn race 'til doomsday

My ways are laced up like strays undazed

Metally ill being real, aint there time no games

Being gay is better than supressing your feelings (fillings) like scared

I'm detached, dont know what to do maybe dispatch,

Embar-

rassed, when I see my idols:

Lets say Wayne, jay, em

So triumphant

Its like I see them through my ray ban

Guess I need to get hit by a ram in the head

Get laid and think bout myself

Come to senses

I am late

chorus (×3):

This is my stream of thoughts,

I look obnoxious,

believe or not

I'm not even conscious

My conscience stops

At the point when I start to

make shit up

verse:

Thoughts become exorbitant

As I grow up,

My skill grows but I'm stopped within

I pick up the pen and locked in it

What happened to the "me" who was exuberant,

Jubilant, took everything as a game and went through with it

Now its like I'm caged, these chains of restraints are laced all the way to my brain

Is that you Vecna, are these not chains

It's all fuckin blood rain (reign)

Wait.. where I'm goin' with this,

Need to be e-lucid-ate(d), (a-lucid-ate)

the poisoned apple is not what I meant

Detectin' the poison tree, I been fooled once maybe twice

And even fooled all my life, Tomfoolery type

Guess mice killin' is I can do, maybe prototype,

call me merciless

But I'm fuckin' loose

mind not ripe as before, i didnt want the hype

The golden goose didnt lay the golden egg

Cuz it was painted with fucking gold paint

Golden than salmon cooked in stainless pans

Caught fresh up the stream in yo' mind,

Lookin' like a white line,

Caramelised but not onions, its what you define

Yeah this my stream of thoughts,

none to be left behind

I'm talkin' way more than comics, its all bout

life....

reddit.com
u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

untitled

He must land,

his egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Cause all I do is mess up, loaded

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

[lyrics] untitled

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Cause all I do is mess up, loaded

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

untitled

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Cause all I do is messed up, loaded

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 10 days ago

Title: There's a reason why they call it Rhythm & Poetry (rap)

He must land,

his egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Cause all I do is mess up, loaded

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 11 days ago

[lyrics] Title: There's a reason why they call it Rhythm & Poetry (rap)

He must land,

his egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

Nevermind, I dont sip tea

But I still fuck 'round like I'm investin'

got no vest on but still barrin'

wick wick

Wicked mouth with a hit list

An evicted clown expectin'

poetic justice

This the real world homie

you mad or autistic

Lines gettin' cold, you better get that sick leave

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and I'm 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm

cowardly

but I try to fend off bitches if they

found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you know we're on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

Well, ironic

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

Doin' this shit up like its too good

My noodle is fried,

Someone hexxed my voodoo

Might be my boo cuz I'm onto

loose screws,

wait, didnt say that right

Got a couple screws loose

yeah, now its cool

The whole clues' that I'm just gettin'

too fooled

My clownin' ass just like a pile of doodoo

Just listened to Man on the Moon

And got high out of the blue

And now I'm spazzin' anti-focal

I would suck if I was a poet

Cause all I do is mess up, loaded

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 11 days ago

[lyrics] wrote it today

He must land,

his egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm cowardly but I still try to fend off bitches if they found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

Cuz I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you we are on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 11 days ago

Wrote it today

He must land,

he's egotistic, ballistic thesis

thinkin' he on some sick shit

But I'm fixed that his wings are

biscuit

All bark no bite feelin' like toothless

Or the movin' castle where they be howlin'

A young fowl, all they know is they are prowlin'

I just pick a style and 'bout it

a magic hat or a super power

doubt it

I may look like courage but I'm cowardly but I still try to fend off bitches if they found me

I feel like playin' cricket cuz I'm

umpirin'

Takin' no sides but still be firin'

Retarded friends are all I cow with

Cuz I'm retarded too

We movin' (mooin) countless

Amount low but you we are on it

Actin' like just dont give a fuck but we be bad sighted

Not bad sighted but bad minded

Remember we are retarded

But still uncouthed

You laugh on us?

I laugh too, criminal blarin' in my headphones

Yo, turn the sound full

reddit.com
u/StructureFlat1889 — 11 days ago

Please give feedback guys its a double narrative rap song by me

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

Verse 1:

Look at him, the victim of daily life

He was a victim since he started school,

his mind was wrapped tight

no one knows, whats comin' in their way

nor he does, hiatus is all i can say

its an essay of the lesson

we learn

from this story of

when he fell in love with this girl

"come honey, let our love unfurl"

little did he know his peril was much worse

it occurs once in a generation

He was a navy-

veteran,

but sometimes love can fuse your mind

make it dream like

every sign you get,

you refuse aight

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 2:

They make love the whole fucking night

And to my fright, they didnt even do it light

The guy thinks "leave no regrets behind, ask her for her hand, dont let your inner demons fight"

He very well knew the demons were right

they said: "this is forbidden love, trust our sight"

He ignores, thinks he'll do what he wants

He wants this love which isn't even on his cuffs

He barely even, reachin' the hints she's leavin' behind

one question and she's like "dont test my patience"

and he's fuckin' fine with that,

he's thinks its alright

sooner or later we're gonna see him di-

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 3:

Now whats more dangerous see my analysis, is it malice, greed, power or cowardice

the cowardice that makes you freeze

like when you see

the demons in yo' sleep paralysis movin' like mannequins, little nightmares, I'm talkin' shit

or is the mind that's in doom like the alchemist

The cat we is talkin' about is an anomaly

Speakin' formally but her mind's like the peak of audacity

She's playin' chess and he's the pawn,

Much like the ex-white wizard, absolute animosity

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 4:

she decides to go on a trip but not with this man, there's a bigger flip

What we thought was a regular blip

But this fuckin' bitch gate keeps this twist

No matter how hard she is he resists

But this fuckin' bitch deserves to get killed

She's plans with her "man" to kill her man

Bang him in the head with a metal pan

And slam him to his damn

He's sleepin' one day and they grab his neck

Choked him to death and dismembered his limbs

Puts him inside a blue drum with wet cement

And throws on the way to their trip

Bluffs that shes with her husband and real nice

But inside this conniving witch is actually feelin' nice

She and partner in crime are flittin'

Far

so no one ever finds bout this

deed contrived in a boulevard

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

(this is a double narrative song based on a real incident happened in india you guys can look up on google "neela drum case" and also there are a lot of misplaced commas just to make the reader/listener understand that therell be a pause, thank you)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 21 days ago

[lyrics]a double narrative song by me

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

Verse 1:

Look at him, the victim of daily life

He was a victim since he started school,

his mind was wrapped tight

no one knows, whats comin' in their way

nor he does, hiatus is all i can say

its an essay of the lesson

we learn

from this story of

when he fell in love with this girl

"come honey, let our love unfurl"

little did he know his peril was much worse

it occurs once in a generation

He was a navy-

veteran,

but sometimes love can fuse your mind

make it dream like

every sign you get,

you refuse aight

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 2:

They make love the whole fucking night

And to my fright, they didnt even do it light

The guy thinks "leave no regrets behind, ask her for her hand, dont let your inner demons fight"

He very well knew the demons were right

they said: "this is forbidden love, trust our sight"

He ignores, thinks he'll do what he wants

He wants this love which isn't even on his cuffs

He barely even, reachin' the hints she's leavin' behind

one question and she's like "dont test my patience"

and he's fuckin' fine with that,

he's thinks its alright

sooner or later we're gonna see him di-

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 3:

Now whats more dangerous see my analysis, is it malice, greed, power or cowardice

the cowardice that makes you freeze

like when you see

the demons in yo' sleep paralysis movin' like mannequins, little nightmares, I'm talkin' shit

or is the mind that's in doom like the alchemist

The cat we is talkin' about is an anomaly

Speakin' formally but her mind's like the peak of audacity

She's playin' chess and he's the pawn,

Much like the ex-white wizard, absolute animosity

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 4:

she decides to go on a trip but not with this man, there's a bigger flip

What we thought was a regular blip

But this fuckin' bitch gate keeps this twist

No matter how hard she is he resists

But this fuckin' bitch deserves to get killed

She's plans with her "man" to kill her man

Bang him in the head with a metal pan

And slam him to his damn

He's sleepin' one day and they grab his neck

Choked him to death and dismembered his limbs

Puts him inside a blue drum with wet cement

And throws on the way to their trip

Bluffs that shes with her husband and real nice

But inside this conniving witch is actually feelin' nice

She and partner in crime are flittin'

Far

so no one ever finds bout this

deed contrived in a boulevard

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

(this is a double narrative song based on a real incident happened in india you guys can look up on google "neela drum case" and also there are a lot of misplaced commas just to make the reader/listener understand that therell be a pause, thank you)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 21 days ago

A double narrative by me

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

Verse 1:

Look at him, the victim of daily life

He was a victim since he started school,

his mind was wrapped tight

no one knows, whats comin' in their way

nor he does, hiatus is all i can say

its an essay of the lesson

we learn

from this story of

when he fell in love with this girl

"come honey, let our love unfurl"

little did he knew his peril was much worse

it occurs once in a generation

He was a navy-

veteran,

but sometimes love can fuse your mind

make it dream like

every sign you get,

you refuse aight

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 2:

They make love the whole fucking night

And to my fright, they didnt even do it light

The guy thinks "leave no regrets behind, ask her for her hand, dont let your inner demons fight"

Little did he knew the demons were right

they said: "this is forbidden love, trust our sight"

He ignores, thinks he'll do what he wants

He wants this love which isn't even on his cuffs

He barely even, reachin' the hints she's leavin' behind

one question and she's like "dont test my patience"

and he's fuckin' fine with that,

he's thinks its alright

sooner or later we're gonna see him di-

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 3:

Now whats more dangerous see my analysis, is it malice, greed, power or cowardice

the cowardice that makes you freeze

like when you see

the demons in yo' sleep paralysis movin' like manequins, little nightmares, I'm talkin' shit

or is the mind that's in doom like the alchemist

The cat we is talkin' about is an anomaly

Speakin' formally but her mind's like the peak of audacity

She's playin' chess and he's the pawn,

Much like the ex-white wizard, absolute animosity

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 4:

she decides to go on a trip but not with this man, there's a bigger flip

What we thought was a regular blip

But this fuckin' bitch gate keeps this twist

No matter how hard she is he resists

But this fuckin' bitch derserves get killed

She's plans with her "man" to kill her man

Bang him in the head with a metal pan

And slam him to his damn

He's sleepin' one day and they grab his neck

Chokes him to death and dismember his limbs

Puts him inside a blue drum with wet cement

And throws on the way to their trip

Bluffs that shes with her husband and real nice

But inside this conniving witch is actually feelin' nice

She and partner in crime are flittin'

Far

so no one ever finds bout this

deed contrived in a boulevard

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

(its a real case happened in my country india hence the double narrative, you guys can look up on google "neela drum case" and also i didnt mimic the whole story just the navy veteran part and the last verse is real mostly and also a lot of commas are misplaced bcs its there to describe that therell be a pause before saying the next word or line)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 22 days ago

Please give feedback guys

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

Verse 1:

Look at him, the victim of daily life

He was a victim since he started school,

his mind was wrapped tight

no one knows, whats comin' in their way

nor he does, hiatus is all i can say

its an essay of the lesson

we learn

from this story of

when he fell in love with this girl

"come honey, let our love unfurl"

little did he knew his peril was much worse

it occurs once in a generation

He was a navy-

veteran,

but sometimes love can fuse your mind

make it dream like

every sign you get,

you refuse aight

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 2:

They make love the whole fucking night

And to my fright, they didnt even do it light

The guy thinks "leave no regrets behind, ask her for her hand, dont let your inner demons fight"

Little did he knew the demons were right

they said: "this is forbidden love, trust our sight"

He ignores, thinks he'll do what he wants

He wants this love which isn't even on his cuffs

He barely even, reachin' the hints she's leavin' behind

one question and she's like "dont test my patience"

and he's fuckin' fine with that,

he's thinks its alright

sooner or later we're gonna see him di-

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 3:

Now whats more dangerous see my analysis, is it malice, greed, power or cowardice

the cowardice that makes you freeze

like when you see

the demons in yo' sleep paralysis movin' like manequins, little nightmares, I'm talkin' shit

or is the mind that's in doom like the alchemist

The cat we is talkin' about is an anomaly

Speakin' formally but her mind's like the peak of audacity

She's playin' chess and he's the pawn,

Much like the ex-white wizard, absolute animosity

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 4:

she decides to go on a trip but not with this man, there's a bigger flip

What we thought was a regular blip

But this fuckin' bitch gate keeps this twist

No matter how hard she is he resists

But this fuckin' bitch derserves get killed

She's plans with her "man" to kill her man

Bang him in the head with a metal pan

And slam him to his damn

He's sleepin' one day and they grab his neck

Chokes him to death and dismember his limbs

Puts him inside a blue drum with wet cement

And throws on the way to their trip

Bluffs that shes with her husband and real nice

But inside this conniving witch is actually feelin' nice

She and partner in crime are flittin'

Far

so no one ever finds bout this

deed contrived in a boulevard

​

chorus: Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

(its a real case happened in my country india hence the double narrative, you guys can look up on google "neela drum case" and also i didnt mimic the whole story just the navy veteran part and the last verse is real mostly and also a lot of commas are misplaced bcs its there to describe that therell be a pause before saying the next word or line)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 22 days ago

[lyrics] a double narrative song by me

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

Verse 1:

Look at him, the victim of daily life

He was a victim since he started school,

his mind was wrapped tight

no one knows, whats comin' in their way

nor he does, hiatus is all i can say

its an essay of the lesson

we learns

of this story of

when he fell in love with this girl

"come honey, let our love unfurl"

little did he knew his peril was much worse

it occurs once in a generation

He was a navy-

veteran,

but sometimes love can fuse your mind

make it dream like

every sign you get,

you refuse aight

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 2:

They make love the whole fucking night

And to my fright, they didnt even do it light

The guy thinks "leave no regrets behind, ask her for her hand, dont let your inner demons fight"

Little did he knew the demons were right

they said: "this is forbidden love, trust our sight"

He ignores, thinks he'll do what he wants

He wants this love which isn't even on his cuffs

He barely even, reachin' the hints she's leavin' behind

one question and she's like "dont test my patience"

and he's fuckin' fine with that,

he's thinks its alright

sooner or later we're gonna see him di-

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 3:

Now whats more dangerous see my analysis, is it malice, greed, power or cowardice

the cowardice that makes you freeze

like when you see

the demons in yo' sleep paralysis movin' like manequins, little nightmares, I'm talkin' shit

or is the mind that's in doom like the alchemist

The cat we is talkin' about is an anomaly

Speakin' formally but her mind's like the peak of audacity

She's playin' chess and he's the pawn,

Much like the ex-white wizard, absolute animosity

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

verse 4:

she decides to go on a trip but not with this man, there's a bigger flip

What we thought was a regular blip

But this fuckin' bitch gate keeps this twist

No matter how hard she is he resists

But this fuckin' bitch derserves get killed

She's plans with her "man" to kill her man

Bang him in the head with a metal pan

And slam him to his damn

He's sleepin' one day and they grab his neck

Chokes him to death and dismember his limbs

Puts him inside a blue drum with wet cement

And throws on the way to their trip

Bluffs that shes with her husband and real nice

But inside this conniving witch is actually feelin' nice

She and partner in crime are flittin'

Far

so no one ever finds bout this

deed contrived in a boulevard

​

chorus:

Hangin' by the noose, d-dead inside

this angst, lives rent free in the mind and banging constant, like a land mine one misstep,

and dispatch

​

(its a real case happened in my country india, you guys can look up on google "neela drum case" and also i didnt mimic the whole story just the navy veteran part and the last verse is real mostly and also a lot of commas are misplaced bcs its there to describe that therell be a pause before saying the next word or line)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 23 days ago

Check out my lyrics gng

Ayo, its like Oogway said

Today's a gift, that's why its called a present

But, my mind's into the future

my past is rotten

my very presence is what i'd

call often

searin' through process-

es; restless, wreckless, my style

grotesque

Its like i broke my curse, but i'm still

haunted

i'm riddled, braindead, heedless

in procedures

blood curdling, its like gettin' fines repeatedly,

Frankestein

I dragged a .9 like its nothing,

shot couple o' times

the time freezed

now i'm here,

fuckin' up rhymes

cancerous, aint no benigns

re-fined, like lime squeezed mixed with some thyme

My writin' binds me like eukaryote

my prokaryotic personality

like hind-sight

Dang....

(very corny😭😭)

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u/StructureFlat1889 — 28 days ago