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three sisters who are three different protagonists: First two are perfect, third one needs work

I'm writing a story where three sisters will be the main characters of my story and have their first-person POVs. First two sisters, I have perfectly crafted their personalities. One is the charismatic, social sister who can charm herself out of any situation but hides behind this charming facade and must learn to be vulnerable with people. Second sister has always felt to be in the shadow of 1st sister...she is very insecure and the only thing she values about herself is her intelligence. She must learn that she has worth just like her sister and that people will like her for who she is– she will learn to become confident.

That leaves us with 3rd sister. The truth is I'm not sure what to do with her. Her storyline is essential for my book and I want three different POVs, but I'm not sure about her personality and internal arc yet. I was thinking she would also be insecure like her 2nd sister, but without the trust in her intelligence, and is too shy to speak up and say what she wants and needs. But I wonder if it's too similar to 2nd sister. Any advice on how I can make her character different enough from the other two sisters?

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 13 days ago

How do I insert a tampon without it being pretty painful and uncomfy?

I found the right hole but it really hurts and I don't know why. And it's so sad because I just came to my rented house by the beach with my friends and now I can't even go in the water, and we're only here for a week. So I want to learn how to insert a tampon in. I can insert it now, but it's still uncomfortable. Any help?

Also idk if i should make this NSFW or not

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 1 month ago
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What are some very, very suggestive ways to get a guy to check you out?

This is for research purposes, promise. I was wondering what are some ways that I as a woman can get this guy to notice me which is a little more naughty? An example is dropping something 'by accident' and picking it up in front of him, haha.

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 3 months ago

What are some very, very suggestive ways to get a guy to check you out?

This is for research purposes, promise. I was wondering what are some ways that I as a woman can get men to notice me which is a little more naughty? An example is dropping something 'by accident' and picking it up in front of him, haha.

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 3 months ago

I am writing a book where a commoner girl enters a reality show where a group of girls fight to become the Prince's betrothed and therefore the next Queen (only a small part of the plot), I have tried but I'm having trouble figuring out what the reality show part should be about. Any tropes?

Hey all, hope you read the title. Basically writing a story where a commoner girl enters a reality show to compete with other commoner girls to become the Prince's fiancee and therefore Queen of the land, which is ruled through monarchy. The reality show is actually just a small part of the story though, and I have tried but I'm having trouble figuring out what I should actually do with it. I'm using it as a plot device. Apart from interviews of the girls and maybe dates and group dates, I don't know what I could otherwise include. Was just wondering if anyone had any ideas or know of any tropes relating to this which I could use, haha. Anything is appreciated. Thank you!

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 3 months ago

How does JK Rowling make such memorable side characters?

All her characters are so recognizable, fascinating, have had hundreds of fanfictions made of them from only a few scenes. Off the top of my head, characters such as Nymphadora Tonks, Fred and George, Hagrid, Mcgonagall. They aren't all overwhelmingly fleshed out and yet people still get hooked by them. How does she achieve this?

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u/Zestyclose-Aside-893 — 3 months ago