Transhuman - What do you think of this establishing panel? - Art by Razz Tsolmon and Chiara Arena

Establishing panels can be difficult. You're trying to cram in as much information (visually and dialogue) into a single panel without overwhelming the audience. I know there's a lot going on here but I hope it does convey the scene without the information overload. (Also ALL the characters have their names provided as well!)

This is the first panel of the sci-fi series Transhuman if you want to press NOTIFY on the Prelaunch link.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1917428739/transhuman-vol-1-to-4-betrayal-sci-fi

u/stextc — 12 days ago

Transhuman - What do you think of this establishing panel? - Art by Razz Tsolmon and Chiara Arena

Establishing panels can be difficult. You're trying to cram in as much information (visually and dialogue) into a single panel without overwhelming the audience. I know there's a lot going on here but I hope it does convey the scene without the information overload.

This is the first panel of the sci-fi series Transhuman if you want to press NOTIFY on the Prelaunch link.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1917428739/transhuman-vol-1-to-4-betrayal-sci-fi

u/stextc — 14 days ago

Transhuman - Art by Razz Tsolmon - Establishing Shot - Thoughts?

I'm working with artist Razz Tsolmon on the establishing shot for this splash page. Most of the story will be happening in this one room with each person having their own agenda etc. I know there seems to be a lot of negative space but it'll make more sense once the lettering are in. Would you have gone for one splash page or multiple panels to show all the characters in the room? Does the splash page build up the tension?

Razz is also available for art projects if interested!

Small self promotion if you want to press NOTIFY on the Prelaunch for this project.

Link - https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1917428739/transhuman-vol-1-to-4-betrayal-sci-fi

u/stextc — 1 month ago

Transhuman - Establishing Shot - Splash Page - Razz Tsolmon

I'm working with artist Razz Tsolmon on the establishing shot for this splash page. Most of the story will be happening in this one room with each person having their own agenda etc. I know there seems to be a lot of negative space but it'll make more sense once the lettering are in. Would you have gone for one splash page or multiple panels to show all the characters in the room? Does the splash page build up the tension?

Razz is also available for art projects if interested!

Small self promotion if you want to press NOTIFY on the Prelaunch for this project.

Link - https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1917428739/transhuman-vol-1-to-4-betrayal-sci-fi

u/stextc — 1 month ago