
Feedback please 🙏 (18 gap year)
First cv I’ve written on the 3rd revision rn ; looking for all the advice and guidance I can get 🙏

First cv I’ve written on the 3rd revision rn ; looking for all the advice and guidance I can get 🙏
Now that I'm looking for another job, I'm beginning to feel that I've been doing my CV all wrong...
I've always included my references with their names, job titles, companies, and contact numbers at the bottom of my CV. I thought it showed transparency and gave employers confidence that my work history could be verified.
But I'm starting to see many people saying that you should rather write “References available on request” and leave the reference details off your CV until an employer asks.
I'm unsure which approach is better.
My thinking was:
\- Including references shows I have nothing to hide.
\- It gives recruiters immediate access if they want to verify my experience.
\- It saves time during the hiring process.
But the other side seems to be:
\- It takes up valuable CV space.
\- Employers usually don't contact references until later in the process.
\- Personal details of referees shouldn't be shared too widely with every company you apply to.
For context, I have a retail/customer service background and I'm applying for roles where reliability and previous work performance are important.
What do recruiters and hiring managers prefer nowadays?
Do you include full reference details on your CV, or do you only write “References available on request”?
Any feedback on writing style / whether they align to person spec below?
Formatting?
Yes, I am aware my work history dates may not align, this is a working document.
Thanks :)
Essential Criteria;
Desirable Criteria;
i actually posted my old cv here and took the advice of the people who were very kind to help out! i made it into a one-pager, made it concise and easy to read, and no school achievements like grades and only the important project-based ones that shows how i developed skills. also, i led 2 research projects where we wrote a scientific paper - so it includes me interacting with ppl and emailing establishments as well as collaborating with my fellow classmates to do it, and took feedback from a research adviser. i definitely think it also shows soft skills but i dont know how to write it. please leave your opinions and what i should do to fix it
Sorry for the low image quality, my phone's been having issues 🥲. I will change the format I just need to get my CV right first.
Rewrote my description, bullet pointed skills (added some detail) and added more bullet points to my experience and linked them to my skills within context. I hope I'm coming close to getting it right.
Open to further feedback! Thanks for all your help on the last one🫡
I've been applying for a year and haven't managed to land an interview in apprenticeships or jobs in general ever since I graduated from sixth form. I wanted to know how bad my CV was which may be the reason why I'm unable to get any jobs due to my lack of experience?
Que debería modificar o creen que está bien? Recién egrese por lo que no tengo experiencia laboral como tal en el área, como viene en el cv lo quiero enfocar en ingeniería clínica o servicio a equipo médico, también quisiera saber si consideran que es indispensable mandar CV en inglés o únicamente en español en general
Kinda struggling to find employment successfully and I don't know if my cv is even good. I did use ai to help by compiling tiktoks and insta info and seeing if that helps but idk every advice helps.
I completed a nursing degree last year and realised during my studies it wasn't for me and didn't want to work as a nurse at all, the plan was to try and use my transferable skills to find an entry level office job but that was a complete fail. During my time at uni and afterwards I was working as a healthcare assistant for an agency, however I do not want to work in healthcare at all so I have been applying for jobs in other fields such as recruitment, admin, reception, childcare and have mostly gotten rejections and only got one interview for a recruitment apprenticeship where another candidate beat me. I have now decided to explore hospitality roles and have created this CV, so far I have just gotten rejections. Please I need advice, what am I doing wrong... I did previously pay a recruiter £123 for a CV review and that got me nowhere.
Condensed everything down to one page, changed up skills and took off some of them, and added to the intro! Thank you to everyone who assisted in this.
Open to more critique on this one now that it's been tailored to customer service, and please be elaborate!
Btw, on the format, I just chose a random template off Google docs, so once the CV has been sorted, ill quickly change it out for something nicer :p
I’ve only ever had one job in retail which closed shortly after i joined. I’m looking for warehouse jobs, porter jobs or retail jobs. what could I add that will make me suitable for all
Recent graduate struggling to find a full time job so need a part time retail/hospitality job. Already applied to many but keep being rejected. Never had a job so have no experience. Always make sure to tailor to the role description. Whats wrong with my CV?
I've been struggling with finding a job so I've redone my CV.
But I'm concerned it now looks more cluttered.
So are these good changes? And anything else that should be changed?
Edit: I'm applying for customer service/contact centre jobs
ive been looking for literally any job for a year now ive been applying on indeed, LinkedIn, going into the shops with my cv. i havent gotten 1 interview. Any CV advice?
I don’t think it’s that great it feels pretty superficial, and I haven’t had any luck getting a job so any recommendations would be helpful.
I’ve never had a job and I’m very lucky that I haven’t had to until now - I’m 19, just been living off savings while I live at home.
I know it would help prospects but I’m not interested in volunteering, to be frank I’m only interested in a retail job for the money.
But my lack of experience makes it hard to put stuff on there, any experience has been through projects and things I’ve been involved in during my degree so far.
I also have an extra art gcse where I went to a class every weekend for a year but I didn’t put that on there because it didn’t seem too important but idk.
I apologize if this is too broad of a request, I'm only just learning how to write a CV alone so nothing for a specific role yet.
I know all the info is meant to fit in one page but for now, I noted down all my experience and how my skills can be seen in practice. Id greatly appreciate your input on how you'd shorten this, change wordings for specific roles and any suggestions like needing IT skills and where I could get that.
So far, Ive been volunteering and all these are volunteer roles! I just took it out since I wasn't sure if employers would like hiring such person. In the little description, I also tried to take out the fact that I was a student looking for part time, cause again, I feel like that'd drive employers away 😭
I'm trying to get as much experience as I can and branch out to different stuff before September. Ive already signed up for 3 more roles, I'm not sure how much inexperience is okay for an 18 yr old and it's making me anxious.
All comments are appreciated :)
(OH and the awards section, I forgot to take it out, sorryy)
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The resume is 80% AI-generated and 20% hand-edited.
I’m looking for a job after a 6-year hiatus, so I’d like to polish this resume.
Thanks in advance