How do I write a script for a comic format?

Pretty self explanatory. I'm a writer but I've never done the comic format so I'm trying to figure out how to make a script while I look for an illustrator

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u/AttiBlack — 16 days ago

Creative A Comic for my Album

So I'm writing a concept album and I wanna turn the story into a comic that I can sell as a set with the merch/CDs. But I'm not a very good artist. How do I find a comic artist who would be willing to do 10-15 issues with me?

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u/AttiBlack — 17 days ago

Feedback Anyone?

This is just a demo! And not at all a professional recording. There will be bass and drums when it's done

u/AttiBlack — 18 days ago
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Advice For New Writers

I like to repost this for new writers every once in a while:

My advice as someone who has been writing for 10 years, this is the same thing I tell everyone

So think about it this way. Every song is a story. So find what story you want to write about. If you can't think of anything, reading will definitely help. Read books, comics, novels, fiction, poems, anything. And truly absorb it. Try not to do it on your phone though, because you'll tend to remember it more if it's on actual paper because of the way our brains interact with our phone screens.

If you can't think of any chords, sometimes I'll just open up a book of chords (or website) and play a bunch until I find one with the sound I want. And build off of that. Or you can just learn a FRIK TON of songs on the same genre so you can figure out a pattern to follow.

Find the melody you want to follow. If you have it recorded, play it on loop for a bit to keep it in your mind. If you don't have it recorded, you can also just either play it a few times over, it just imagine it.

Keep it in your mind and just think of the music in your head. Lay/sit down. Close your eyes. And picture what you want the music to sound like. Then hum out the melody. Feel what kind of story the music tells. Romance? Revenge? Anger? Love? Sadness? Feel every note with your heart. Remember how it makes you feel and let it resonate with you with every bone in your body. Feel it in your ears and let it fill your mind. And once you realize what story the music is telling you, write it down. You don't have to write the lyrics down, but write the story down. Remember the story. Then go back and fill it in with lyrics, telling it in a melodical and poetic way so when you hear it, your heart still feels it as if you're going through it again.

In technical/practical terms, I use this format for songs but it's not hard and fast by any means

Intro (Present): The hook of the story - Jump right in and tell what's happening in the present

Verses (Past): The exposition of the story - Tell the surroundings as indirectly as possible while still getting your point across (I tend to use as many metaphors as I can but you don't have to)

Chorus (Present): The heart of the story- What's happening at the present moment? Why is this story important?

Bridge (Present): The changeup/advancing of the story. - What happens after the Chorus to continue the story?

Outro (Present): The ending of the story - Wrap up the story with the moral and the purpose? (Often but not always a modification of the Chorus)

Try using this format to remember where you are and where you need to go with the story

SIDE TIPS:

  1. WRITE EVERYTHING DOWN NO MATTER HOW STUPID IT SOUNDS. If you get a whole song or verse pop into your head, write/record it on your phone so you can get it quicker before you forget it. If you're doing it slowly, write on paper because your brain builds a stronger connection

  2. White noise can help if you can't think of chords. Your brain tends to try and find patterns in white noise, rain, fans, etc. find something that works and switch it up. Remember that it can also distract you as well, so if it does, you can always turn it off

  3. Try to find music in anything and everything around you. A faucet dripping. A toilet flushing. The sound of a page turning. The sound of a door opening. Anything.

  4. Don't overthink it. You can (and should) always go back and expand on your lyrics. Correct them, make them more precise and less direct

  5. Don't ever be afraid to ask for help or advice. You'll get better a thousand times quicker by a friend ruthlessly critiquing your work until you learn the structure you like than you will by showing someone who will tell you that you did a good job every time.

I know this is a lot but I hope it helps! You're gonna do great! Godspeed!!!

[Edit]

NEVER USE AI!!!! EVER!!!! FOR ANY REASON!!!

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u/AttiBlack — 18 days ago

WW2 (Or 1) fiction novel

It's about a man who goes to Germany from the US. I don't remember why but I'm pretty sure he was smuggled. And I think it opens on him on the boat. He speaks fluent German because his grandfather insisted on it but it's a running thing that he needs to soften his K's. I believe he accidentally kills a Gestapo after being attacked and spends a lot of the book hiding from the police. Toward the end, he ends up staying in Germany to hunt as many corrupt leaders or something of the like.

I believe somewhere toward the end, there's also a gas chamber that's disguised as a school

I think it has a red cover and has the word "bull" or "garden* in it but it's not Garden Of The Beasts I don't think

It's a fantastic book and I'm trying to recommend it but it was a library book I read in high school

There was also what I think was a speakeasy with a server we later find out is trans

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u/AttiBlack — 21 days ago

How long can my song be?

I was thinking about doing Welcome To The Black Parade. Is that too long? It's 5:11 so I don't know if they have a time limit

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u/AttiBlack — 2 months ago

How do I maximize the chance to for my video submission to get chosen?

I'm someone who sings like Gerard Way from My Chemical Romance normally. But I doubt if I did that, I'd get chosen. So I was thinking of doing an original. But the question is if I should do something more rock and performative, or something that straight just shows off my voice and sounds good.

The bigger issue is how to do an original acoustic song and still stand out. I'm a very big performer so I was thinking of doing something like being blindfolded with my guitar behind my head while I was singing and playing but I don't know if that will matter or not. But maybe it would help me get picked for the performance.

Someone help out? I have a lot of talent and drive. And I don't care about winning, I just want to get my music to the world

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u/AttiBlack — 2 months ago
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Why can't I see who viewed my videos?

Before you ask, my profile views are on. But when I open up the video to see who viewed it, it won't let me see. The icon is gray

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u/AttiBlack — 2 months ago

Can I get some tips on a song I wrote and recorded?

I know it's not perfect and the tempo is off in a few parts. IMO there's too much going on in the chorus as well. I wrote it and recorded the demo at the same time so it's just a first draft

u/AttiBlack — 2 months ago

Need help with parental controls

I made a password for my kid's phone for parental controls. Now I've lost the password and it won't let me change it because the account I used as a verification wasn't Gmail. How can I change my pin?

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u/AttiBlack — 3 months ago

Would Drowning Lessons be a good song to cover for my band?

I'm in a cover band and we do a lot of MCR covers and I was wanting to know if it would be a good song to cover

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u/AttiBlack — 3 months ago

My best friend is in boot camp and I want to write him a letter, but I want to make sure my letter doesn't get flagged and will still send. So if I cuss or use slurs in my Sandboxx letter as a joke, will it still get to him?

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u/AttiBlack — 4 months ago

I'm putting together a Pop Punk band. I have some original stuff but I need to get some popular but not overly played songs to get heads nodding. Any ideas?

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u/AttiBlack — 4 months ago