u/Careful-Role-6873

Not sure if this is a basic idea so mods lemme know please.

Alright, so this would be a action game game, you make your character and choose between a rabbit, a dog, or a cat, which you customize as well.

Well the pet escapes your house one day coming back home that night all puffed up wise wide n shit. So your character goes to give your pet a bunch of cuddles as it shakes, when you hear tapping on the window you ignore it cuz your pets on your lap though.

The next morning as you go out for a walk, you get a huge migraine the screen becomes blurry as footsteps are heard and a mysterious voice calls out to you saying "Give me, your creature." The screen returns to normal, the main character confused goes back home to their pet. They look at a corner, and see a monster pointing at the main characters pet. The main character asks "what do you want em for! Get out!" All the monster does, is open its jaw wide.

Here you have two options carry the pet and run or fient the monster ("give" the pet to the beast but punch it before running).

The goals with endings are

Get to your closest friends house and fight the beast

Get to your closesf friends house and fortify the house

Get to your closest friends house and you all drive away

Or fail to get to your friends house where you just see a jumpscare (i think its already implied whats gonna happen to the pet but ion wanna show nor write that. Im a pet owner my biggest fear is my pet dying)

Hello! I started playing a few months ago, im trying to get better at it but im also an author so i do have a few questions.

What tips do you have? Im thinking of making a piece but im lowkey scared

Is there a piece that kinda starts off soft almost soothing and then slowly transitions into a more harsher eerie tone? If not how would it be done?

Is there a way i should take better care of my viola?

I think thats all have a good day!

Hello! I got a scene in my book i wanna talk abt, i kinda want some questions or feedback!

So some backstory Leon is adopted by an alien which is infected by a parasite (that once was human, a marine called yamato)

The parasite makes the alien make a giant school on another aliens back (its like the size of new york) where the parasite kills humans with the aliens body, and takes in orphans/runaways to try and get them to believe "humans=evil" and the HUMAN orphans/runaways are 'some of the good ones' cuz theres demons and orcs type shi

Anyways Elizabeth and bultrig end up going to this school (imma js call em E and B for now they arent that important to what imma be saying), E and B take the entrance exam finding out the school might as well be a cult they leave. Leon leaves with them cuz his starting to doubt his father/s.

Okay here's my thing how should the scene where leon decides to go with them go? Also at some point Leon meets himself from another universe where the infected alien gives in and allows the parasite to be the permanent user of the body before ever meeting leon see with the alien, Leon is raised under the aliens marine+psycho ideals leading to leon still having morals with the Aliens paladin side.

If the alien had died then its just the alien guiding and raising leon also how can i use this version of leon to forshadow that B is a literal apacolyotic event? Like his gonna be yapping i dont want him to literally say "yeah that dudes dangerous" thats lame. Also what should "evil" leons personality be like? Im thinking identical but idk

So i have been out of the religion for a while due to the abuse I went through im still a minor aka i still live with my not so "chill" parents if you know what I mean. so I found out we are taking a road trip to this big ass church id don't want to go my last resort is forcing myself to get sick but do you guys have any other ideas? I've tried saying "oh my friend invited me to a sleepover" but instead they moved the date to sometime else they can't catch a hint which is good AND bad in my case. how do i skip this without being caught?

So i have been out of the religion for a while due to the abuse I went through im still a minor aka i still live with my not so "chill" parents if you know what I mean. so I found out we are taking a road trip to this big ass church id don't want to go my last resort is forcing myself to get sick but do you guys have any other ideas? I've tried saying "oh my friend invited me to a sleepover" but instead they moved the date to sometime else they can't catch a hint which is good AND bad in my case. how do i skip this without being caught?

The first snake proud and luminescent

The second, strong and brave

Two serpents slithering upon the willow tree

With their hearts on their backs they held one another
Coiled into each other
Touching the cool bark

They soon laid a singular egg
That of which arrived a strong serpent bold and rough
Thus the leaves began to shake

Many moons passed
And so another egg arrived
What hatched was, a smaller serpent with beautiful green scales

The willow trees leafs shook
Moons passed and what was once hearts on the backs 
Of the once loving elder snakes

Turned cold stone
The serpents began to circle each other
Hissing violently 

Teeth were bared
All it took was one second
In the blink of an eye

Both serpents were covered in the others venom
The two younger serpents, the children
Sniffed the air with their tongues

The scent of the venom
Clinging to their minds and soul
Like a parasite which would never loosen its grip

The older serpents paid no mind
As they coiled each other again
A pattern to repeat for an eternity

Moons passed as they always do
The willow tree shook against aggressive winds
The children looked at each other
The bigger serpents mind becoming misty
Began to grow it's fangs

As the fangs grew, 
The venom began to form,
Until in a fit of rage.

The stronger serpent,
Bit it's weaker sibling,
It's venom coursing through the weaker ones blood.

The serpent strong and bold,
Paid no attention to the venom it inflicted,
As the older snakes showered it with gifts and praise .

For many moons this was another pattern,
The strong received praise,
The weak received venom.

The willow tree leafs shook violently,
As they always do,
The weaker serpent coiled itself around the branch.

It held its dreams and hope around it,
As it gave them to the elder serpents,
Only for them to break the branch.

The weaker serpent fueled by pain from the fall,
Grew its fangs bright and sharp,
Yet dared not to bite.

As it still held a silver of hope,
That if a past existed,
Then it may come anew.

I personally feel this is too long, mostly because imma be using this for my college essay any thoughts/suggestions?

The first snake proud and luminescent

The second, strong and brave

Two serpents slithering upon the willow tree

With their hearts on their backs they held one another
Coiled into each other
Touching the cool bark

They soon laid a singular egg
That of which arrived a strong serpent bold and rough
Thus the leaves began to shake

Many moons passed
And so another egg arrived
What hatched was, a smaller serpent with beautiful green scales

The willow trees leafs shook
Moons passed and what was once hearts on the backs 
Of the once loving elder snakes

Turned cold stone
The serpents began to circle each other
Hissing violently 

Teeth were bared
All it took was one second
In the blink of an eye

Both serpents were covered in the others venom
The two younger serpents, the children
Sniffed the air with their tongues

The scent of the venom
Clinging to their minds and soul
Like a parasite which would never loosen its grip

The older serpents paid no mind
As they coiled each other again
A pattern to repeat for an eternity

Moons passed as they always do
The willow tree shook against aggressive winds
The children looked at each other
The bigger serpents mind becoming misty
Began to grow it's fangs

As the fangs grew, 
The venom began to form,
Until in a fit of rage.

The stronger serpent,
Bit it's weaker sibling,
It's venom coursing through the weaker ones blood.

The serpent strong and bold,
Paid no attention to the venom it inflicted,
As the older snakes showered it with gifts and praise .

For many moons this was another pattern,
The strong received praise,
The weak received venom.

The willow tree leafs shook violently,
As they always do,
The weaker serpent coiled itself around the branch.

It held its dreams and hope around it,
As it gave them to the elder serpents,
Only for them to break the branch.

The weaker serpent fueled by pain from the fall,
Grew its fangs bright and sharp,
Yet dared not to bite.

As it still held a silver of hope,
That if a past existed,
Then it may come anew.

I personally feel this is too long, mostly because imma be using this for my college essay any thoughts/suggestions?

So I’m on vacation with my family, and my family is well off but my parents also started homeless.

Bringing us to today, where we went to a store in a pretty rundown market area. Mostly for the pattern nonetheless run down. we all saw this homeless man couldn’t be older then twenty. Shoes broken and his clothes covered in clothes. And all I did was walk past him like he didn’t exist just like my entire family did. I did try to give him twenty bucks which would get him some bread and a drink but I didn’t want to get in trouble with my family or for them to think less of me. I kept walking with the twenty dollars in my hands like a greedy pig and I feel like shit.

BACKGROUND INFO: OK, so as the title I’m I’m writing a OK so I have an idea OK so it’s an armor this character and her friends end up going to an island where one of her friends is originally nationality and a war is about to happen. She Olympic pole vaulter she really would be useless in a war because well her she is more in one 1V1 battles. she is better at fighting like stuff stronger than her sure but she can’t fight very well in a all out brawl. This is because she is built to be able to last so the people of this kingdom go “do you want to participate in this war? don’t have to you’re not from here. This is your choice“ and she’s like “I’m gonna be fighting in the war. I’m fighting in the war” and like the people make a special set for her so that she can fight in it

THE IDEA: so they make her this huge armor set basically, the legs are going to be like 6 inches bigger than the rest of the body will probably be like twice as big as her. The point is to make her able to get more damage without her getting injured so they strap her up to these levers into the armor piece into the armor set and give her this huge chasis. this set will have two gauntlets. The one on the left is more like what’s that one weapon that like is a ball with a bunch of metal spikes it’s gonna be like that, but on the opposite of of the and it’s going to be completely bald so that and the same will be on the one on the right, but on the left one it can detach chain so that she can basically just throw her hand around and it can retract the one, but they’ll both have the bald spot like at the other end of the so that she can slam the floor with her to hand with one hand or just hit someone with the bald that they can either be launched or she can launch yourself up and do a as she always handle also be like huge so that you can block most but most of the body will be lighter the only parts or the arms because that’s how she’s going to survive. I was wondering if this is a good idea for a piece if anybody has any like colors or color scheme I would greatly appreciate it!

sorry for yapping :(