I wonder why no one has criticized the concepts she used in writing her male characters.
It's very common for people to mention her neglect in writing female characters, which is true. She doesn't pay much attention to writing female characters, for some reason. Some people even said she has some internalized misogyny or at least she's a Fujoshi (=Boy's love fans) and that's why her female character is flatter than male characters etc.
Which is pretty confusing to me. Just because Vivziepop doesn't neglected her male character, dosen't mean she doesn't seem to have prejudice(?) against them.
First of all, have you noticed that almost every male character in this story is consistently a terrible father/husband/boyfriend/FWB/friend/older brother or at least have potential to be one.
Like, almost all of them. Regardless of their intentions, whether they're deliberately behaving like that or not, whether they're trying their best, they always terrible in at least one of these roles.
Or if they don't, they always described as "well they're too coward or silly to be a threat" (Abel, Sir Pentious , Moxxie)
If they don't have family/partner or a friend it's always "They're just too evil to care about anyone and too selfish to have a family/partner/friend" (Alastor, Striker)
Meanwhile female characters are never defined to be evil because of these roles (mother/sister/girlfriend/friend) but it rather their "influence from environment make them evil" or "they have no choice but to be evil" all the time.
Take a look at Vaggi, (Even she is the morally grey one, not pure evil.) she was created to be an exorcist so she has no choice but to do her job. Or Loona, she maybe rude constantly but she was an mental unstable orphan that probably got emotionally neglected before.
So it's count as "they have no choice" and influence from environment is to blame.
Charlie is a terrible friend to Angel, sure, but it's dosen't present as "evilness" but it's more like "she doesn't mean to" all the time.
Velvette aren't good person either but it's rarely show that she is have anything against our main cast because she just went along with her friends. She is never defined to be evil because one of these roles (mother/sister/girlfriend/friend) either.
I don't know if this is what Viv's intention or just her subconscious but it's kinda weird to me that nobody brings this up before. I didn't try to nitpicking anyone but if they gonna criticise writing about character's gender then why no one addressed elephant in the room?